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Road Trip With the Kids

They fret
There yet?

She bit
He hit

Jaw tight
Food  fight

Oh Gee
Must Pee

More thrill
Big Spill

Irate
We're late!

They nod
Thank God!

 I think
BIG drink

funnylifefootle

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Connie Gildersleeve

February 10, 2013 at 7:38 AM

Barbara congrats on your win. Well done. Warm Smiles, Connie

Apoorva Patrikar

February 9, 2013 at 9:50 PM

haha! congrats on your win! nice 1

Poet Destroyer A

February 9, 2013 at 9:01 PM

Barbara, Congratulations on a job well done, in Yasmin's footle fun contest:-) take care~PD

Kim Merryman

February 9, 2013 at 6:44 PM

Sounds like you have made a few of these long trips! Congrats on your 1st place win, Barbara! Love, Kim

Tim Ryerson

February 9, 2013 at 2:54 PM

And have a BIG one for me too, Barbara!...This is the funniest one I have read so far...writing footles requires a good sense of humor and you obviously have that! - Tim