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Road-Side Test

There was once an old boozer named Dale

   Who guzzled copious pints of ale

      Although he tried his best

         He flunked the road-side test

            And was remanded sans bail to jail

Copyright © Robert L. Hinshaw | Year Posted 2023

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Gershon Wolf Date: 12/22/2024 7:48:00 PM Dale goes to jail! ~ Bucket and Pail, gw Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 7/3/2023 8:19:00 PM The old boozer Dale was such a fool - Not adhering to the golden rule - To be staying alive - One must not drink and drive - For drunken dudes Shanks’s pony is cool.……. Belle Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 7/6/2023 11:18:00 AM Belle, I love your poetical reply. You should post this one - I think it would get a good reception by soupers Bob

Panagiota Romios Date: 7/3/2023 6:52:00 PM Perfect, my friend. I say that because you are not a comment collector. Well how do we know who is? Those who read you,drop you like a dead skunk all of a sudden. Don’t know we have feelings? Panagiota Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/3/2023 3:27:00 AM ... got what he deserved ... great, Bob :) - hugs Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 7/3/2023 6:27:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Great to hear from you and best to you - Bob H

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/2/2023 6:46:00 PM drinking and driving never mixed, well done Robert. Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 7/3/2023 6:27:00 AM Thank you, Mystic and what you say is so true. Have a wonderful 4th - Bob

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/2/2023 4:51:00 PM Good one, Bob! I enjoyed… Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 7/2/2023 4:51:00 PM Thanks, Ilene. I like to write lims and hope to come up with more. Happy Fourth - Bob

Michael Tor Date: 7/2/2023 2:57:00 PM Lol Robert I know a few that have followed in his footsteps. Hope you are well my friend. Have to really catch up on your lovely Poetry. God bless you... Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 7/2/2023 4:49:00 PM Thank you, Michael for your kind comments and continued support. Best on you and keep well. Bob H