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. After the tragedy it became maritime law (SOLAS) that all passenger ships must carry enough lifeboats and life jackets for everyone on board and to carry out a muster drill and lifeboat drill within 30 minutes before leaving port.
Built by Harland and Wolff in the shipyards of Belfast A luxurious gigantic cruise ship that they built to last She was an Olympic class liner of the White Star Line No expense was spared in construction she was grand and so fine. From Southampton to Cherbourg then from Queenstown in Cork Picked up her last passengers before sailing on to New York Large crowds gathered at the quayside to cheer her and wave flags While excited passengers embarked with large suitcases and bags. She upped the ships anchor then headed out due west Pushing her coal fired engines, putting them to the test Oblivious to the dangerous ice fields that lay up ahead  And in the coming hours many on board her would be dead. The officer on the bridge lookout a large object he spied A foreboding mountainous iceberg on the starboard side They slowed down the mighty engines and put them into reverse But it collided with the iceberg and then conditions got worse. Just below the water line it tore a gash down the one side It couldn't have been avoided but to avoid it they'd tried Freezing dark seawater poured in and she started to bank Sadly, it was only a matter of time before the mighty Titanic sank. Abandon ship was the order; that Captain Edward Smith gave Now the task for the crew was how many lives they could save The crew got ready all the lifeboats and lifejackets too Now everyone's survival depended on the captain and crew. Despite their best efforts to try and keep order and calm With the worsening situation there was sheer panic and alarm First into the boats were all the women and little children And any places that were free they allowed in some men.  But for everyone on board there was not enough lifeboats, And all they had was a life jacket, so they grabbed anything that floats Some took their chances, and they jumped over the side But the freezing Atlantic waters took them, and they didn't survive. Over two thousand people on board, not all could they save Fifteen hundred passengers and crew perished in a watery grave A distress call had been sent before she sank, and other ships started to arrive Providing blankets and warmth to those who'd managed to survive.  1912 on the fifteenth day of April, was the date of that tragedy It was the worst maritime disaster that ever happened at sea It only took two hours and twenty minutes before she was on the seabed Experts had claimed her "Unsinkable", that's what they'd said. Written 27 november 2018

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Date: 11/26/2023 11:44:00 PM
The tragedy of Atlantic, though we have heard a hundred times, each time we are reminded of that fateful incident, our minds too sink to the ocean of gloom. You have narrated the story with your unusual gift of story telling. Your rhyming without saying is excellent as every time .
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Date: 11/27/2023 12:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, every day lives are lost at sea, it's an unforgiving hostile environment. The tragedy of the Titanic will never be forgotten. After that happened it bacame international law to have enough lifeboats for passengers and crew. Tom
Date: 2/16/2020 5:39:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOM have a great day with all the family, I wish I was 64 again you are the same age as my younger brother. Friends coming to stay - hopefully! So out for a nice meal later. Enjoy your birthday celebrations dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/16/2020 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Ann, enjoy your day too.
Date: 2/16/2020 3:38:00 AM
A brilliant story Tom - Congrats! Recently took my granddaughter to Southampton to see Titantic Exhibition. It was good & we spent several hours there. Enquiry statements were read out and it seems binoculars had been locked away and the man who had the key left her at Southampton not realising it was in his pocket! So they were unable to see iceburg with their naked eye, by then it was too late. Maybe this terrible tragedy could have been avoided - I wonder? With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/16/2020 4:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Ann, very wet today, all the family up later, my birthday today when you get to 64 you try and play it down lol. I heard that story, they changed one of the officers at the last minute and he forgot to give them the key, how tragic that was. My brother flew over them on his way to America once and he said it was like a mountain range, they didn't stand a chance. Enjoy the day, keep inside Dennis the menace still about lol. Tom
Date: 2/3/2018 7:26:00 PM
A brilliant write about the Titanic Tom; its weird that right after the ship went down in 1912 with a handful of rich men who were against the Federal Reserve that the following year it came to be…Great historical write Tom!~Che :)
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Date: 2/3/2018 10:58:00 PM
Thanks Cheryl, Glad you enjoyed. I wouldn't put it past some people where money was involved,Was JP Morgan really behind it, and some say it wasn't the Titanic but its ageing sister the Olympic, some sort of insurance scam, again big money. Perhaps we'll never know .(did I write about the wrong ship ?) We certainly love our conspiracies. Regards Tom
Date: 1/20/2018 1:21:00 AM
It is wonderful how you have written on so many historical incidents like this one - there are a lot on the Titanic but this is very unique and vivid I could imagine the situation, I love each line :( :))
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Date: 1/20/2018 1:51:00 AM
I read an article and aim for the main facts of it, then the hard work begins putting it to rhyme,I know it would be easier with say free verse but as you've noticed I love rhyme. This was truly a major tragedy one of many that has happened at sea. Regards Tom.
Date: 12/16/2017 8:48:00 AM
Tom! This is great! I love naval history and this is a gem. This poem should be in history books. Very beautifully done!
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Date: 12/16/2017 1:36:00 PM
Rhoda, Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Regards Tom.
Date: 12/15/2017 12:43:00 AM
Great job!
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Date: 2/3/2018 10:44:00 PM
Thank you Richard Regards Tom
Date: 11/27/2017 5:26:00 PM
Wonderful poem, wonderful story of the most famous ship, thanks for sharing, kind regards, Kevin
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Date: 11/27/2017 7:04:00 PM
Thank you Kevin, the story has always fascinated me, such a tragic ending though. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Regards Tom
Date: 11/27/2017 5:09:00 PM
You told the tale so brilliantly Tom! I've been to the Titanic exhibition in Belfast and you should send them a copy of this fabulous this poem :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/27/2017 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Jan, It is a ship that I think everyone has heard of, A beautiful ship that had such a tragic ending.We do underestimate the power of nature sometimes. Thank you for the suggestion, I'll forward it on to them. Regards Tom

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