Audrey Haick Poet Haiku

Riveting Moonbeams

Lover #1  riveting moonbeams
                flood calm quiescent river 
                loving eyes alight

Lover #2  In quiet moments
                Silently I wait for you
                Peering through picture window
                And suddenly you appear
                Ripples shimmer in soft breeze

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For Deb's "Love Talk" Contest

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Gert W. Knop March 12, 2011 at 5:43 AM Lovely Haikus you've penned here, Annalise! I'm sorry not being able to comment many poems as my arm and hand still hurts. Thank you for all your kind comments! Will post another Tanka on spring today. Finally it is getting a bit warmer now! Have a great weekend...Love, Gert

James Fraser March 10, 2011 at 6:54 AM Wow Annalise, love it. All the best with this fine piece in Deb's contest....:)

George Aul March 9, 2011 at 11:41 AM Good luck in the contest with this pleasant entry......George

Jack Horne March 7, 2011 at 7:36 AM Lovely, Annalise, and thanks for your kind words : ) Jack

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2011 at 7:12 AM wow, another amazingly gorgeous one. I can see any possiblity of mine being on the list just evaporating!! Luv, Andrea

Judy Konos March 7, 2011 at 5:59 AM very calming and lovely. Thank you for posting. best, Judy

Nette Onclaud March 6, 2011 at 10:29 PM whew, anna! passion blooms like you! love the last line...:) winning wishes to you :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire March 6, 2011 at 8:31 PM Most of the entries have had one party in despair and the other offering comfort. Yours is unique in that both the man and woman have an uplifting perspective. Annalise, you are such a delight to read. Always refreshing, creative and true to your heart. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Deb Wilson March 6, 2011 at 8:18 PM very beautiful and touching...love,Deb

Harry Horsman March 6, 2011 at 7:52 PM lovely and Riveting Annalise. Harry