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River's Journey

Tired waters push their way through rocks
Rocks hugged by rotting ivy's green
Green surrounds the wild forest's stream,
Stream flows calm, through places unknown...

The river flows to embrace the sea,
Her delighted droplets swirl, now free.
The journey ends, none can disagree -
The sight is pure tranquility.


9th Sep 2015

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/5/2017 11:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Sneha. So glad to see this lovely poem.

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 3:11:00 PM

SNEHA, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Judy Konos

Date: 10/11/2015 10:41:00 AM

very beautiful....I have been missing you...

Len Gasun

Date: 10/6/2015 11:12:00 AM

This is excellent and very creative poem about the beauty of a river my dear friend, Sneha. It's my pleasure to read one of your precious gems this evening. A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing! May I also have this chance to thank you for your loving greetings and wishes on my birthday. Many hugs back at you. I'll be back to read more of your awesome work next time if it will be fine with you. You write so well. Again, tytysssm and God bless! love lots, Leonora

Sneha Rv
Date: 10/6/2015 11:15:00 AM

Thanks you so much for your support and lovely comment, dear Leonora!! :D :D

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/6/2015 7:09:00 AM

A very lovely poem, Sneha, that flows beautifully like the river your imagery portrays so well. A belated congratulations on your nice placement in Nette's contest! Hugs, Sandra

Sneha Rv
Date: 10/6/2015 11:15:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your lovely comment, dear Sandra!! :D :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2015 3:53:00 PM

Thanks for your comment today and I hope to read some new poetry from you very soon!! Yes, I really love Mahatma Ghandi. WE need more like him in the world.

Sneha Rv
Date: 10/5/2015 8:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Andrea!! I will try ti post a new one soon!! :D :D

Paul Callus

Date: 10/5/2015 3:06:00 PM

Full marks for this lovely poem, Sneha! I like the construction, the imagery and the rhyme in the 2nd stanza. I can feel a sense of serenity. ~ I notice that this poem has also been a winning entry, so...congratulations:) // paul

Sneha Rv
Date: 10/5/2015 8:58:00 PM

Thank you so much for your support and lovely comment!! :D :D

James Horn

Date: 9/28/2015 5:48:00 AM

To God I make a pleasant plea; Sneha's poems are great, I must agree.

Sneha Rv
Date: 9/28/2015 5:52:00 AM

Thank you so much for your support and lovely comment!! :D :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2015 5:06:00 PM

Hi, sweetie. waiting for another poem of yours to post! Have a great day.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/26/2015 10:53:00 PM

Dear Sneha Great flow of the inspirational, light and lovely so smooth in perfectional terms I really loved the poem, excelllent, and good luck in the contest but I feel you have a great chance of winning, cheri

Sneha Rv
Date: 9/28/2015 5:53:00 AM

Thanks a lot!! The contest is judged.. Thanks for your support!! :D :D