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Rivers in Our Veins - Hiku 10 -

Written: May 27, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand ************** [ s~t~r~e~a~m~s rush t h r o u g h u | s] | [ s t o n e s holding o | n ] | | l [ to the~ s i l e n c e o o v ] f e { Written to complement the embedded video }

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Date: 5/29/2025 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations dear poet for your top win in Brian`s contest and thanks for sharing the post. Wish you a pleasant day.
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Date: 5/28/2025 11:20:00 PM
How beautifully youv presented your hiku dr sotto, i love the title and also the theme and how descriptive it is as well as how your words are so creatively delivered! Its so nice to see your hiku this time for brians, and you definitely did amazing here! I love “the silence of love” and also “streams rush through us” passionate and amorous! Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light always! Its so nice to see Brians hiku used more now! Keep sharing them
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Date: 5/28/2025 4:57:00 AM
A wonderful haiku. The silence of love. Quite a profound concept.
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Date: 5/27/2025 2:20:00 PM
Lovely! "streams on stones"- moving acceptance
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Date: 5/27/2025 1:54:00 PM
Creative one. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 5/27/2025 1:47:00 PM
Very creative Sotto. If it were me I would just place the l above the o
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Date: 5/27/2025 8:13:00 PM
Thanks for the right proposal, Tommy
Date: 5/27/2025 12:56:00 PM
- WooW ...
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