River Watching

A string of scows
lift on a late flux.
Sunset spreading itself
along the crests of far hills.

The Ohio plunges into cooling shadows,
then a shimmering pause
as the water opens its body.

Ripples fall away from the light,
shape-shift into Shawnee canoes.
There are natives 
under the tipped-up boats
still leisurely paddling into 
the grass skirts of Kentucky

A late breeze sighs
rattling tall reeds.

Evening slips under her clothes.
For a moment, 
the river shines for the moon
while it climbs over darkening trees. 

I get up from my camp-chair
stretching.

Ten years, I remember.
Ten years of emptying out.
I look at my open hands,
feeling easy, as a fresh 
rain-washed creek.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/26/2019 9:04:00 AM
Really liked this poem. Trying to find words , but only a feeling is evident. Thanks a lot.
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Date: 8/26/2019 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Tamanna, a poem is often the feeling it conveys, so I like your comments. Have a great day.
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