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river side

the docks a bent old man on the pier cleaning catfish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 3/10/2009 3:16:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for a creative poem. You let the reader experience this piece with concrete visuals. Nice job! Karen
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Date: 3/10/2009 1:15:00 PM
I can picture this scene!! Nicely done, Patricia! ~ Carrie
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