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River Runners

Mist creeps upward from the valley below, As morning chill in the air settles down New River rages ‘neath a dense foggy flow. First rafts set off the launch, a “heave ho!” Tourists watching, some frightened, frown Mist creeps upward from the valley below. Younger, experienced rafters love the show River rapid’s tour guides put on the clown New River rages ‘neath a dense foggy flow. The first stretch of the run is rather shallow, Little chance of the canoe running aground Mist creeps upward from the valley below. Soon spying the Class Three rapids, a bellow But squealing first-timers drown out sound, New River rages ‘neath a dense foggy flow. Hours later elated runners will tip the fellow Reaching the shore and their land legs found Mist creeps upward from the valley below New River rages ‘neath a dense foggy flow.
Written June 15, 2022

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Date: 6/18/2022 7:24:00 PM
I have never been on a river raft; this is the only adventure I dream of all the time, so though I have never had the pleasure, i can feel the joy!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/18/2022 7:40:00 PM
I can hear you screaming as you go over the rapids!
Date: 6/16/2022 2:03:00 AM
You write in Villanelle form so well, Milt. This river adventure is no exception.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/16/2022 9:40:00 AM
Thanks, Jenna. I like to use the form whenever it seems to work well with the theme.

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