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River Rock Falls

River Rock Falls We hiked a few miles in the wilderness just to feel that waterfall's kiss Our clothes, we hung up in a tree There is no one here but you and me As the sun heats up the day In those falls we laugh and play Sunbathing on a blanket in the open air without a worry or a care We'll hang out here all day long Enjoying nature's water song Within the waterfall's liquid kiss we make love in romantic bliss Here in our secret paradise Underneath nature's bright blue skies.

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Vera Duggan

Date: 6/25/2017 10:44:00 PM

Lenna this poem reminds me of our day out yesterday, we visited a place on the river called Bells Rapids and what a beautiful spot it was, only problem is the rapids were not running as we haven't had any rain, but as soon as the rains come we will deffinately go back, the is such a lovely write my dear, take care.....Vera

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/26/2017 10:17:00 AM

Thank You my friend:) I do hope you get some rain and you go back to see those rapids flowing soon. Enjoy and take care :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/21/2017 5:41:00 PM

Sensuous and lovely, Lenna!

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/25/2017 1:12:00 PM

Thank You so much Kim for your nice compliments :)

Darren White

Date: 6/16/2017 11:53:00 PM

I live in the Netherlands. The name says it all :D

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/17/2017 11:43:00 AM

Yes it does Darren :) Check out the upper peninsula of Michigan if you get a chance, there are so many beautiful waterfalls there.

Darren White

Date: 6/15/2017 4:04:00 AM

Love this Lenna, the outdoors, I'd love to see another waterfall, I miss them here where I live, this country is okay-ish, but it's so flat hah.

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/16/2017 10:51:00 AM

Thank You Darren :) Michigan can be so beautiful. All the great lakes and many inland rivers and lakes. The upper peninsula has a LOT of waterfalls and the Porcupine mountains. The beautiful green summers and colorful Autumn days. (If there was no winter, I'd say it was perfect) Where are you, that it is so flat ?

Sara Ella

Date: 6/14/2017 7:47:00 PM

This is such a wonderful, romantic and I would say a perfect day <3 You have captured a beautiful memory in a lovely rhyme. <3 <3 <3

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/16/2017 10:55:00 AM

Thank You Sara, it was all of that and a memory for the keeping. Glad you liked this one :)

White Wolf

Date: 6/13/2017 4:47:00 PM

The first poem of the day and I find this little treat! Sounds like an experience you'll never forget, Lenna! A beautiful rhyme poetess

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/14/2017 10:55:00 AM

Very True Rick, easily written from memory and no, I will never forget that little bit of paradise on Earth. Thank you so much Rick :)

Chris Green

Date: 6/13/2017 3:03:00 PM

Sensually beautiful and such an alluring scene you have created with your words Lenna. This is so dream-like to me, the perfect day...it honestly can't get much better than this. And all of it wrap up in such a wonderful, smoothly flowing poem. I loved this one my friend.

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/14/2017 10:51:00 AM

Thank You Chris, it really was like a fantasy ......... all that freedom and privacy with a special person and in such a beautiful place ..... It truly was a perfect day in 2007 !! Really happy you liked this Chris :) :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/13/2017 2:59:00 PM

Very sweet and romantic.

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/14/2017 10:47:00 AM

Thank You Tim, it really was :)