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River Ribbon

river ribbon winds through green - hills burst gold with tangerine For Rick Parise's Nature Monoku Contest Submitted Aug 5, 2021 for 'A Brian Strand 1,2 or 3 line' Contest

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Bhawana Pant

Date: 8/12/2021 9:27:00 PM

Wow! hills burst gold with tangerine....Lovely.. Congrats Andrea..

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/12/2021 8:13:00 AM

lovely inside side, Andrea ~ delightful. Congrats

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/7/2021 11:25:00 AM

WoW! Too good! Loved the word river ribbon. Congratulations

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/7/2021 9:14:00 AM

Beautiful! Congrats!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/7/2021 9:10:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win. This monoku has such a flowing movement to it like a river. Love the ribbon image and the colors. It "bursts" with joy! Blessings

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/7/2021 6:39:00 AM

Beautiful Monoku. Congratulations on your win!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 2/13/2015 7:44:00 AM

This is a huge painting with one small line, beautiful!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/17/2012 1:28:00 AM

what wonderful imagery....

James Fraser

Date: 7/16/2011 10:00:00 AM

Oh my! what a terrific image I view Andrea. Rich in colour, such richness through your words. Belated congratulations on this deserved win. Have a lovely weekend :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 12:35:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2011 6:01:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/12/2021 8:21:00 AM

Back with congrats. Sara

Sidney Beck

Date: 6/3/2011 10:53:00 PM

yeah..... tangerine pouring through he cleft in the Tetons...there is no end to the images which come to mind in this absolutely beautiful spot........used to live nearby a long time ago....congratulations and my best wishes as always

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/3/2011 8:33:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your super win with this creative entry for Rick ..well done my friend..luv.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/3/2011 2:30:00 PM

Very Nice,,, beautiful images race across my screen in this Monoku...luv Michael

Constance La France

Date: 6/2/2011 8:07:00 PM

A really lovely monoku Andrea, I wish you luck with this poem.~now regarding your blog about finding a poem, you can try this, go to My Poems, click the headings, like category, if you are looking for a funny poem, they will all be listed, you can click on form if you want haiku's for example, or click on poem title for alpha, or even date for date written, this is how I find my poems~~

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 6/2/2011 1:52:00 PM

Such beauty in this piece Andrea.I should have wrote a poem about you cause you inspire me with everyone of your poems I read.Thank you so very much for sweet comment.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/2/2011 2:04:00 AM

A jewel of imagery Andrea, wishing you all the best for Rick's contest :) love Wilma

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 6/1/2011 10:45:00 PM

wonderful entry....hope we'll win,..hehehe........lolz.. =D <3 <3 <3 <3 little hearts ---junjun

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2011 3:42:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by my work and the kind review..The Prom Dress was pale blue with white trim..The top was like a sundress with very thin tie straps....The skirt was very full made so by having twelve gores which were small at the top flaring out at the bottom..Made a of satin..Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 6/1/2011 1:41:00 PM

Would love to go floating down that River Ribbon you have conjured up so artistically. Thanks for your understanding. Luck in the Monoku contest

James Foulk

Date: 6/1/2011 12:07:00 PM

a great write Andrea, really enjoyed this beautiful piece. thank you for commenting on Glow worm in love.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/1/2011 10:37:00 AM

Great entry. Good luck. Thanks for your comments on my ballet. I was basing it on experience of a niece who won a full scholarship to ballet school. It is very painful for them until they callous over their poor toes. Koyce

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/1/2011 9:33:00 AM

Nice imagery on this write Andrea. Thanks a million for taking the time and reading all of my poems. It is appreciated. At the rate you write it will take me ages to catch up ha ha. Have a great one. love phyl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/1/2011 9:09:00 AM

sounds like a yummy summer dessert Andrea so full of vibrant energy luv.. good luck in Rick's new contest.. oh such an awesome title too..

Jack Horne

Date: 6/1/2011 8:55:00 AM

Awesome imagery, Andrea : )