River Ribbon

river ribbon winds through green - hills burst gold with tangerine
For Rick Parise's Nature Monoku Contest Submitted Aug 5, 2021 for 'A Brian Strand 1,2 or 3 line' Contest
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Pant Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 9:27 PM
Wow! hills burst gold with tangerine....Lovely.. Congrats Andrea..
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 8:13 AM
lovely inside side, Andrea ~ delightful. Congrats
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 11:25 AM
WoW! Too good! Loved the word river ribbon. Congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Beautiful! Congrats!
Kauffman Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win. This monoku has such a flowing movement to it like a river. Love the ribbon image and the colors. It "bursts" with joy! Blessings
Alex Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Beautiful Monoku. Congratulations on your win!
Yvonne Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 7:44 AM
This is a huge painting with one small line, beautiful!
Horsman Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 1:28 AM
what wonderful imagery....
Fraser Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Oh my! what a terrific image I view Andrea. Rich in colour, such richness through your words. Belated congratulations on this deserved win. Have a lovely weekend :)
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 12:35 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Back with congrats. Sara
Beck Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 10:53 PM
yeah..... tangerine pouring through he cleft in the Tetons...there is no end to the images which come to mind in this absolutely beautiful spot........used to live nearby a long time ago....congratulations and my best wishes as always
Sweetheart Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 8:33 PM
Congrats Andrea on your super win with this creative entry for Rick ..well done my friend..luv.
Falotico Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 2:30 PM
Very Nice,,, beautiful images race across my screen in this Monoku...luv Michael
La France Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 8:07 PM
A really lovely monoku Andrea, I wish you luck with this poem.~now regarding your blog about finding a poem, you can try this, go to My Poems, click the headings, like category, if you are looking for a funny poem, they will all be listed, you can click on form if you want haiku's for example, or click on poem title for alpha, or even date for date written, this is how I find my poems~~
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June 2, 2011 at 1:52 PM
Such beauty in this piece Andrea.I should have wrote a poem about you cause you inspire me with everyone of your poems I read.Thank you so very much for sweet comment.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Neels Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 2:04 AM
A jewel of imagery Andrea, wishing you all the best for Rick's contest :) love Wilma
Villanueva Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 10:45 PM
wonderful entry....hope we'll win,..hehehe........lolz.. =D <3 <3 <3 <3 little hearts ---junjun
Kendrick Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 3:42 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by my work and the kind review..The Prom Dress was pale blue with white trim..The top was like a sundress with very thin tie straps....The skirt was very full made so by having twelve gores which were small at the top flaring out at the bottom..Made a of satin..Sara
Austin Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Would love to go floating down that River Ribbon you have conjured up so artistically. Thanks for your understanding. Luck in the Monoku contest
Foulk Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:07 PM
a great write Andrea, really enjoyed this beautiful piece. thank you for commenting on Glow worm in love.
Johnson Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Great entry. Good luck. Thanks for your comments on my ballet. I was basing it on experience of a niece who won a full scholarship to ballet school. It is very painful for them until they callous over their poor toes. Koyce
Babcock Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Nice imagery on this write Andrea. Thanks a million for taking the time and reading all of my poems. It is appreciated. At the rate you write it will take me ages to catch up ha ha. Have a great one. love phyl
Sweetheart Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:09 AM
sounds like a yummy summer dessert Andrea so full of vibrant energy luv.. good luck in Rick's new contest.. oh such an awesome title too..
Horne Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Awesome imagery, Andrea : )
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