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River Path a Seasons Dance

chilling breeze of swift Autumn leaves
                    
                through a misty toned Lavender path

                 Feeling closer to Heaven and Earth

Copyright © Shanity Rain | Year Posted 2013

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Skat A Date: 10/9/2013 11:31:00 AM Shanity, , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 10/9/2013 11:37:00 AM Thank-you , I love writing in the Am' fresh with a strong cup od coffee, usually fresh !!

Jeremy Martin Date: 10/6/2013 2:32:00 PM Lovely poem--- I'm curious about your capitalization, though..especially lavender. Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 10/6/2013 9:46:00 PM Interesting you found that , I have a picture of a river path and It looks lavender ! Being my Favorite color , one of them , thank-you !

Ralph Taylor Date: 10/3/2013 9:13:00 PM Excellent, Yvette. Great write. Nice going. Ralph Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 10/4/2013 11:44:00 AM Thank you My sweet friend Ralph , as I have said , if I could spend all day reading yours and others ..work is calling ;(

Sandra Adams Date: 10/3/2013 9:29:00 AM gorgeous haiku, the image unfolds beautifully...congrats on your win :) Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 10/3/2013 9:33:00 AM Thank-you My Beautiful friend , I can see you in all that beauty , walking down the path :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/2/2013 9:41:00 PM YVETTE, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA** Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 10/3/2013 9:39:00 AM Oh My ! Just noted 2nd ! Thank-you Linda , I am really complimented you see my poem a winner , for you all are so amazing ! smiling all day to work , Congratulations to everyone , Craig Cornish , the others ..I want to read so bad ! Shanity Rain Date: 10/3/2013 9:32:00 AM Absolutely I will , I fi could stay on this site all day , I would ! Thank-you I love you guys !

Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/20/2013 3:59:00 PM THAT LAVENDER PATH SOUNDS BEAUTIFUL Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 9/22/2013 10:45:00 AM I am too many syllables. 8-9-9 wrong .. Shanity Rain Date: 9/22/2013 10:43:00 AM Thank-you Liam , my 1st attempt at Haiku , and really expanding my thoughts with how one could only write in this style.

Eileen Manassian Date: 9/20/2013 9:50:00 AM Lovely imagery....evoked sweet feelings. Great write, Yvette...Hugs! Lovely avatar, by the way! :) Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 9/20/2013 10:11:00 AM Thank-you , Your is angelic ~ learning all different forms , I can see how one may be addicted to this Haiku style. Love To you ! Yvette

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/20/2013 9:43:00 AM - Beautiful haiku, Yvette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 9/20/2013 9:48:00 AM Thank-you one of my Fav poets ! You have beautiful haiku poems written .