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River Path a Seasons Dance

chilling breeze of swift Autumn leaves
                    
                through a misty toned Lavender path

                 Feeling closer to Heaven and Earth

autumnbeautifulbeautyheavenimaginationhaiku

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Skat A

October 9, 2013 at 11:31 AM

Shanity, , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love

Shanity Rain

October 9, 2013 at 11:37 AM

Thank-you , I love writing in the Am' fresh with a strong cup od coffee, usually fresh !!

Jeremy Martin

October 6, 2013 at 2:32 PM

Lovely poem--- I'm curious about your capitalization, though..especially lavender.

Shanity Rain

October 6, 2013 at 9:46 PM

Interesting you found that , I have a picture of a river path and It looks lavender ! Being my Favorite color , one of them , thank-you !

Ralph Taylor

October 3, 2013 at 9:13 PM

Excellent, Yvette. Great write. Nice going. Ralph

Shanity Rain

October 4, 2013 at 11:44 AM

Thank you My sweet friend Ralph , as I have said , if I could spend all day reading yours and others ..work is calling ;(

Sandra Adams

October 3, 2013 at 9:29 AM

gorgeous haiku, the image unfolds beautifully...congrats on your win :)

Shanity Rain

October 3, 2013 at 9:33 AM

Thank-you My Beautiful friend , I can see you in all that beauty , walking down the path :)

Poet Destroyer A

October 2, 2013 at 9:41 PM

YVETTE, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**

Shanity Rain

October 3, 2013 at 9:39 AM

Oh My ! Just noted 2nd ! Thank-you Linda , I am really complimented you see my poem a winner , for you all are so amazing ! smiling all day to work , Congratulations to everyone , Craig Cornish , the others ..I want to read so bad !

Shanity Rain

October 3, 2013 at 9:32 AM

Absolutely I will , I fi could stay on this site all day , I would ! Thank-you I love you guys !