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River One

I stand, the sun so bright it almost pulls me upwards and towards it. Out of my now empty shoes, and merging with my eyes. The shades of my vision, from burning white...down, down to the moist, scatter of colors in the rocks below. They roll and twist in the push of the water. In...around...out... I want to spread my fingers to catch them as they shimmer in the sunlight. Gobble up those golden dreams, flickers of truth. Like my thoughts, almost too quick for me to catch, before they roll back into the darkness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/24/2011 1:22:00 PM
Julia ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Julia. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:36:00 AM
Julia, you have an artist's eye! Beautiful descriptions in words. You painted a lovely image in my mind. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Julia
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