River of Now

Skimming on a film surface
of a slow-motion river
I'm a clear tear on a
delicate twig balancing like a dancer-
Side to back to side, gliding, riding,
the brief sense of belief 
in what's underneath.
I dive in below the water
My mind floats gracefully above sky
to cold blue, black, then light...
No need for eyes, open or shut
Blindness extinguished by brilliance.
My breath paints strokes of God in my lungs
I push out a guttering cry
Now, inhaling now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 28, 2025 at 7:12 PM
This is beautiful, Tamra. Congrats being featured- :)
Brown Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 8:00 AM
A joy to read an older poem by one of my favorite poets Tamra. Love, Carol
Lewis Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 6:38 AM
I picture many things when reading these. Birth, swimming, something floating on a stream. I really like the way you presented this. TL
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June 1, 2009 at 12:45 AM
Another lovely write from you my friend, well done. Anna-Marie.
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May 16, 2009 at 6:50 AM
This captures nature, and human emotion ...all together as one. Great poem! ~:)
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