River of Glass

The river of glass Reflects the breaking of dawn Blue stage curtains part

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John Freeman

Date: 3/8/2010 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey, Agape, Moses

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/28/2010 8:04:00 PM

Audrey, I love your perception of the dawn with the curtains parting. The way the sunrays shine down it does look like curtains parting. This is an outstanding haiku that is very deserving of winning. Congratulations. Blessings, Connie

Marty Owens

Date: 2/25/2010 6:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Audrey...love your Haiku...Marty

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/25/2010 5:38:00 PM

This is very good, Miss Audrey. I like it. Line three is unique. Your poetry always has a sensitive, glass quality to it. I wish sometimes I did. Best wishes and Thank you Gerard. Sorry about the E-mail imbroglio. I'll write you soon asbout some idea I had about some of your poetry. I'll be in touch next week or so. My e-mail is Keoghstawski@Yahoo.com.

James Fraser

Date: 2/22/2010 1:15:00 PM

No wonder this one won Audrey, its very very good > congratulations >> James

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/22/2010 5:21:00 AM

Congratulations dear Audrey well deserved win.Charma

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/21/2010 5:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your third place win in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2010 7:01:00 AM

bravo for this haiku, Audrey! I really liked your last line--great ending to a beautiful aiku--sorry I keep popping out like a mushroom during a thunderstorm, I share my internet connection so I don't have much time online, sad to say--anyhow just wanted to thank you for all your kind and inspiring comments on my writes :) enjoy your Sunday!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2010 7:54:00 PM

Congrats Audrey on your third place win in Raul's recent contest.. such a well descriptive Haiku and a wonderful win for u my BBF ..luv.. Linda-Marie..