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River of Dreams

She stood on the bridge and watched opportunity drift farther downstream
________________________ Contest: Setbacks Sponsor Nayda Ivette Negron 7/9/16

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Date: 7/13/2016 5:01:00 PM
this is fantastic. No win??
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Date: 7/11/2016 7:03:00 PM
Carrie, I think this is wonderful, and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 7/11/2016 3:37:00 PM
I really like your Senryu Carrie. Very thought provoking.
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Date: 7/10/2016 5:03:00 PM
Oh, I wish I had thought of this!!!
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Date: 7/10/2016 12:51:00 PM
How did you know I did that? Profound, Carrie - a Senryu I felt ... CayCay
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Date: 7/10/2016 7:24:00 AM
I've done this---well done Carrie
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:18:00 PM
A profound and excellent senryu dear Carrie.
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