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We jumped into a river of dreams... together Lazily drifted over histories... swept up in life mysteries Swift current dropped over edge of reality... back on dry land... alone Written 2-18-2016 For 'River of Dreams' (three line poem or 3 Monoku) By Poet Destroyer A Form Chosen: Three line poem Tenth Place

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Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/17/2016 5:50:00 PM

Hi Susan, Wonderfully evocative imagery. Congrats. Cheers, Brian

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/26/2016 5:46:00 AM

Hi Susan. What a beautiful way of summing up Life as a River!!!! Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/4/2016 12:53:00 AM

Thank you Teddy for taking time to read and the wonderful comment. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 11:15:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Susan..

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/22/2016 12:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Dr.!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:29:00 PM

thanks for the thanks

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/21/2016 9:55:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserving win Susan. It is a beautiful poem with a spectrum of fleeting suggestions.

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/22/2016 12:55:00 AM

Thank you very much! Appreciate you stopping by to read and to comment. You are very kind.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/21/2016 9:26:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL VERSE !!Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win ,Susan! Hugs Eve

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/22/2016 12:54:00 AM

Thank you Eve! Hugs...

Paul Callus

Date: 2/21/2016 2:27:00 PM

This is lovely, Susan, and you caught me unawares when you came back on shore, alone! ~ Congratulations on a fine win. Regards // paul

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/21/2016 7:21:00 PM

Thanks Paul! Appreciate your comment and kind words.

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/21/2016 1:34:00 PM

Very sad but beautifully penned. Congrats on your win my lovely friend,bl

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/21/2016 7:59:00 PM

Thank you BL!

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/21/2016 12:46:00 PM

Lovely, Susan. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'river of dreams' contest. Hugs, Sandra

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/21/2016 7:57:00 PM

Thanks Sandra! Appreciate. Hugs...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2016 10:31:00 AM

this was one of my absolute favorites in the contest. Congrats. I would have had it in top three!! It really is so great how you ended this one.

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/21/2016 7:52:00 PM

Ahhh I like how you think! Thank you Andrea.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:14:00 AM

Susan, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/21/2016 7:45:00 PM

Thank you!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/19/2016 10:19:00 PM

Cool metaphoric imagery, Susan. You took us through a lifetime in just three short lines. Awesome. ... everyone is being so creative on this contest. Each one has an interesting take on it (that I've read so far anyway).

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/21/2016 7:31:00 PM

Thanks you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2016 5:27:00 PM

I REALLY dig how you did YOURS!! One of the best.

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/21/2016 7:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! Very nice of you.