Susan Gentry Poet Free verse

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River of Dreams 1

We jumped into a river of dreams... together

Lazily drifted over histories... swept up in life mysteries

Swift current dropped over edge of reality... back on dry land... alone


Written 2-18-2016

For 'River of Dreams' (three line poem or 3 Monoku)
By  Poet Destroyer A
Form Chosen: Three line poem

Tenth Place

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Brian Mcclain March 17, 2016 at 5:50 PM Hi Susan, Wonderfully evocative imagery. Congrats. Cheers, Brian

Teddy Kimathi February 26, 2016 at 5:46 AM Hi Susan. What a beautiful way of summing up Life as a River!!!! Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-) Susan Gentry March 4, 2016 at 12:53 AM Thank you Teddy for taking time to read and the wonderful comment. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 21, 2016 at 11:15 PM Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Susan.. Susan Gentry February 22, 2016 at 12:56 AM Thank you so much Dr.!

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 10:29 PM thanks for the thanks

Probir Gupta February 21, 2016 at 9:55 PM Congratulations on a well deserving win Susan. It is a beautiful poem with a spectrum of fleeting suggestions. Susan Gentry February 22, 2016 at 12:55 AM Thank you very much! Appreciate you stopping by to read and to comment. You are very kind.

Eve Roper February 21, 2016 at 9:26 PM BEAUTIFUL VERSE !!Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win ,Susan! Hugs Eve Susan Gentry February 22, 2016 at 12:54 AM Thank you Eve! Hugs...

Paul Callus February 21, 2016 at 2:27 PM This is lovely, Susan, and you caught me unawares when you came back on shore, alone! ~ Congratulations on a fine win. Regards // paul Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:21 PM Thanks Paul! Appreciate your comment and kind words.

Bl Devnath February 21, 2016 at 1:34 PM Very sad but beautifully penned. Congrats on your win my lovely friend,bl Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:59 PM Thank you BL!

Sandra Haight February 21, 2016 at 12:46 PM Lovely, Susan. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'river of dreams' contest. Hugs, Sandra Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:57 PM Thanks Sandra! Appreciate. Hugs...

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2016 at 10:31 AM this was one of my absolute favorites in the contest. Congrats. I would have had it in top three!! It really is so great how you ended this one. Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:52 PM Ahhh I like how you think! Thank you Andrea.

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 10:14 AM Susan, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~ Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:45 PM Thank you!

Timothy Hicks February 19, 2016 at 10:19 PM Cool metaphoric imagery, Susan. You took us through a lifetime in just three short lines. Awesome. ... everyone is being so creative on this contest. Each one has an interesting take on it (that I've read so far anyway). Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:31 PM Thanks you!

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2016 at 5:27 PM I REALLY dig how you did YOURS!! One of the best. Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:27 PM Thanks Andrea! Very nice of you.

Luke Irwin February 19, 2016 at 9:37 AM Very nice! Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:25 PM Thanks!

Brian Davey February 18, 2016 at 11:16 PM Very strong question forced in the end of this wonderfully written Monoku Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:23 PM Thanks for your comment! I reconsidered and changed the ending. :)