River Story

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River Story Streaming with a story of its own, snakes the ancient river along. Glistening in the gold sunset, it speaks with the breath of the wind. Rushing, gurgling, bubbling, living waters, beneath your tidal flow are words of God. 3/4/17

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/7/2017 9:08:00 AM

This is mindblowing, Janis:) I love that last line, a 7, wish I could give a 10:)

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 3:52:00 PM

Thanks, Jo. Blessings.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2017 3:49:00 PM

Janis, this is outstanding work. I probably have loved almost all the river poems. To think only ten can win. It boggles my mind!!!

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 3:54:00 PM

They have all been very beautiful this time. Hard contest to judge. Thanks and blessings.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2017 10:25:00 AM

your river flows with poetic wonder, janis.. love it!..huggs

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/5/2017 2:10:00 PM

Thanks, nette. Blessings, Janis

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/5/2017 6:08:00 AM

Glorious ...

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/5/2017 2:11:00 PM

Thanks, Probir.