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River Lessons

Lessons mark river’s diverse edge where mind and body search as fed. Twilight wiggles dreams in shore's mud, lullabies glisten night above - River floats yearnings in coursed mystery, easily, on fickle-dark, tossed water. ... CayCay March 5, 2017

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Carol Mays

Date: 12/11/2017 4:07:00 PM

Love the magic and depth of this poem.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/12/2017 12:26:00 AM

Carol: You just proved that if one lived long enough, anything could happen! Since this poems conception for a contest, I've really sparked to it, but noticed mostly neutral comments and I didn't place in the contest. Such was my like of the write that I didn't care! To thyself be true, I was reminded by you. Thanks ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2017 8:43:00 AM

Is this the one you said had no comments yet? I see several now including mine. Let me go see if it was the J poem perhaps!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/6/2017 5:00:00 AM

Your entry is unique CayCay!...Hope to see it on the winning list. I gave up trying. It is too time consuming and then to keep getting N/A's...Just not worth it. My poetry is not in your caliber or Andrea's either. Hugs, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2017 10:11:00 PM

Very nicely done, Caycay. Kind of philosophical while also being descriptive. Twilight wiggles toes is very clever. I keep seeing so many good ones like yours and yet he only gives ten wins. It's so sad! Sure hope you and I can make his list!

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/5/2017 8:55:00 PM

Good one CayCay, best wishes in the contest...rkr