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River Deep Mountain High

With this tear halfway to heaven I love you, goodbye Hear me calling you falling into you dreaming of you I surrender all the way if I could the colour of my love At last come to me Immortality in unison to love you more Hear me calling you falling into you dreaming of you Faith in us forget me not think twice set me free I'm your angel At last come to me Immortality in unison to love you more The power of love seduces me Fly love can move mountains Faith in us forget me not think twice set me free I'm your angel I surrender all the way if I could the colour of my love The power of love seduces me Fly love can move mountains With this tear halfway to heaven I love you, goodbye Celine Dion songs in order: With This Tear. Halfway To Heaven. I Love You, Goodbye. Calling You. Falling Into You. Dreaming Of You. I Surrender. All The Way. If I Could. The Colour Of My Love. At Last. Come To Me. Immortality. Unison. To Love You More. Faith. Us. Forget Me Not. Think Twice. Set Me Free. I'm Your Angel. The Power Of Love. Seduces Me. Fly. Love Can Move Mountains. Submitted on April 11, 2018 for contest MUSIC PANTOUM sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 3RD

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/30/2018 2:55:00 PM

Well done, Line! Nice use of the titles in creating this sad romantic poem. Congrats on your podium win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/28/2018 3:13:00 AM

Congratulations, Lin on your win.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/27/2018 4:32:00 PM

Congratulations Line, for your wonderful win with your amazing poem. 'With this tear halfway to heaven I love you, goodbye' - this line is such a beauty and a striking way to start and end your pantoum. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/27/2018 8:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2018 4:15:00 PM

Awesome creative verse, Line, congratulations on your Pantoum win. Could you believe I screwed up on mine :( I never do.. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/27/2018 9:02:00 PM

Been there, done that and did get the t-shirt ! I know the feeling, Eve.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/24/2018 7:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the music pentoum contest. Well done! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2018 8:04:00 PM

Thanks, Susan. much appreciated.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/24/2018 1:54:00 PM

Back to say Congrats, Line XXOO

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2018 3:21:00 PM

Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2018 1:35:00 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful 3rd place in the contest, a great music choice Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2018 3:21:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/24/2018 1:28:00 PM

Hi Line, I really enjoy Celine Dion and her music. She has an amazing voice. This is good tribute to her in Pantoum form. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2018 3:22:00 PM

Thanks, Alexis, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Silent One

Date: 5/24/2018 12:35:00 PM

Great choice for pantoum, just a bit short.. You did well to well to get all those titles in, however if you had made it a bit longer, the poem may have flowed a bit better.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2018 3:23:00 PM

Thank you for the feedback and the placement, SO. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/13/2018 3:47:00 AM

I skipped the Hillbilly blow billy poem for obvious reasons, and it was difficult but I do have integrity, Line. This is a beautiful poem Line. It reminds me of women who have lost everything to heaven.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/13/2018 4:36:00 AM

Thanks, Caren, I know what you mean. Much appreciated.