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River Deep Mountain High

With this tear   halfway to heaven   I love you, goodbye     
Hear me calling you   falling into you   dreaming of you    
I surrender all the way   if I could   the colour of my love       
At last   come to me   Immortality   in unison   to love you more    

Hear me calling you   falling into you   dreaming of you  
Faith in us   forget me not   think twice   set me free   I'm your angel       
At last   come to me   Immortality   in unison   to love you more    
The power of love seduces me   Fly   love can move mountains

Faith in us   forget me not   think twice   set me free   I'm your angel       
I surrender all the way   if I could   the colour of my love       
The power of love seduces me   Fly   love can move mountains
With this tear   halfway to heaven   I love you, goodbye     




Celine Dion songs in order: With This Tear.  Halfway To Heaven.  I Love You, Goodbye.  Calling You.  Falling Into You.  Dreaming Of You.  I Surrender.  All The Way.  If I Could.  The Colour Of My Love.  At Last.  Come To Me.  Immortality.  Unison.  To Love You More.  Faith.  Us.  Forget Me Not.  Think Twice.  Set Me Free.  I'm Your Angel.  The Power Of Love.  Seduces Me.  Fly.  Love Can Move Mountains.


AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on April 11, 2018 for contest MUSIC PANTOUM sponsored by SILENT ONE  -  RANKED 3RD

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Sandra Haight Date: 5/30/2018 2:55:00 PM Well done, Line! Nice use of the titles in creating this sad romantic poem. Congrats on your podium win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 5/28/2018 3:13:00 AM Congratulations, Lin on your win. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 5/27/2018 4:32:00 PM Congratulations Line, for your wonderful win with your amazing poem. 'With this tear halfway to heaven I love you, goodbye' - this line is such a beauty and a striking way to start and end your pantoum. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/27/2018 8:59:00 PM Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper Date: 5/27/2018 4:15:00 PM Awesome creative verse, Line, congratulations on your Pantoum win. Could you believe I screwed up on mine :( I never do.. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/27/2018 9:02:00 PM Been there, done that and did get the t-shirt ! I know the feeling, Eve.

Susan Gentry Date: 5/24/2018 7:14:00 PM Congratulations on your win in the music pentoum contest. Well done! :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2018 8:04:00 PM Thanks, Susan. much appreciated.

Mike Gentile Date: 5/24/2018 1:54:00 PM Back to say Congrats, Line XXOO Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2018 3:21:00 PM Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/24/2018 1:35:00 PM - Congratulations on your wonderful 3rd place in the contest, a great music choice Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2018 3:21:00 PM Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Alexis Y. Date: 5/24/2018 1:28:00 PM Hi Line, I really enjoy Celine Dion and her music. She has an amazing voice. This is good tribute to her in Pantoum form. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2018 3:22:00 PM Thanks, Alexis, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Silent One Date: 5/24/2018 12:35:00 PM Great choice for pantoum, just a bit short.. You did well to well to get all those titles in, however if you had made it a bit longer, the poem may have flowed a bit better.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/24/2018 3:23:00 PM Thank you for the feedback and the placement, SO. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/13/2018 3:47:00 AM I skipped the Hillbilly blow billy poem for obvious reasons, and it was difficult but I do have integrity, Line. This is a beautiful poem Line. It reminds me of women who have lost everything to heaven. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/13/2018 4:36:00 AM Thanks, Caren, I know what you mean. Much appreciated.

Elaine George Date: 4/13/2018 1:43:00 AM I give you credit...such a hard form to master, but you have. Elaine Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/13/2018 4:35:00 AM Thank you, Elaine. Some poems are much harder than others to self-evaluate.

James Horn Date: 4/12/2018 5:24:00 PM If you had heard me calling, You have heard me bawling; Sadly doing; You viewing; And in love had been falling. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/12/2018 8:07:00 PM The quote of the year, James. Thank you so much for that. LOL Line xx

Michelle Faulkner Date: 4/12/2018 2:29:00 PM This is beautiful, now I want to listen to all my favorite Celine Dion songs! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/12/2018 4:14:00 PM Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle.

Mike Gentile Date: 4/12/2018 8:43:00 AM Excellent, Line!!!! and I love CELINE Best of luck xxoo Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/12/2018 9:29:00 AM Thank you so much, Mike. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/11/2018 3:10:00 PM These pantoums look a bit tricky to me. I'm in two minds whether or not to attempt one. I only knew rhyme before I joined soup. Good luck Line. Tom Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/12/2018 9:30:00 AM 100% faith in you, tom. Tom Cunningham Date: 4/11/2018 8:35:00 PM You're putting me under great pressure line.lol. I'll have a look. Line Gauthier Date: 4/11/2018 5:22:00 PM You can do it, Tom. Give it a shot!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/11/2018 1:16:00 PM - A beautiful writing and many beautiful songs by Celine Dion - Best wishes in the contest, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/11/2018 1:27:00 PM Thank you, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit.