River Deep

As clear as crystal, living waters effervesce the fountain of life

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/27/2009 4:32:00 PM

Beautiful thought and style .. very descriptive .. demonstrative message.. need your help.. tonight I signed on as a premier member of PS .. followed all instructions ... but the yellow star does not appear on my poetry as yet... does it take time to activate .. my member page is also not showing the premier link either... please help if u can ... thankxxx LMB

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 10/24/2009 8:12:00 AM

This is fascinating. Are good in Spanish? I need to email the prophecy of Fatima. Many thanks.

Elaine George

Date: 10/20/2009 12:12:00 AM

EXCELLENT CINQKU! BRIAN. AGAIN! I WANT TO THANK YOU FOR CONTINUALLY TEACHING AND CHALLENGING MY CREATIVITY. IT IS A HONOR TO PARTICIPATE IN YOUR CONTESTS. SINCERELY, ELAINE

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/19/2009 7:45:00 AM

This is such a beautiful Cinqku, Brian! This leaves me with such an uplifting feeling, refreshed! Thank you for sharing and also the opportunity to participate in your contest! Love, Robin

Adell Foster

Date: 10/18/2009 8:03:00 PM

Brian this ia a very lovely cinqku write, in imagery, tone, form, and flow, I have truly enjoyed the read my friend. I thank you for sharing and for your wonderfully insightful critiques... as wll as your lovely acknowledgement of my piece in your last contest. Your comments are most welcomed. :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/18/2009 9:09:00 AM

I am back to say once again, many thanks for the acknowledgement in your last contest...for sponsoring new challenges that help us to stretch our imaginations. Thank you Brian, and looking forward to seeing what your new contest is all about! Best Wishes. Love, Carrie

Donna Golden

Date: 10/18/2009 12:41:00 AM

This is a wonderful example of how just a few words can express deep truths in a beautiful way. Excellent write, Brian! Hugs, Donna

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/17/2009 8:25:00 AM

Your own spiritual river runs deep, and you share so much of those wonderful, crystal clear waters with your friends! Thank you once again for your uplifting words! ~ Love, Carrie

Amber Jenkins

Date: 10/17/2009 7:37:00 AM

COOL! IMPRESSIVE!