River Deep

As clear
as crystal,
living waters
effervesce the fountain
of life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sweetheart Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 4:32 PM
Beautiful thought and style .. very descriptive .. demonstrative message.. need your help.. tonight I signed on as a premier member of PS .. followed all instructions ... but the yellow star does not appear on my poetry as yet... does it take time to activate .. my member page is also not showing the premier link either... please help if u can ... thankxxx LMB
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October 24, 2009 at 8:12 AM
This is fascinating. Are good in Spanish? I need to email the prophecy of Fatima. Many thanks.
George   Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 12:12 AM
EXCELLENT CINQKU! BRIAN. AGAIN! I WANT TO THANK YOU FOR CONTINUALLY TEACHING AND CHALLENGING MY CREATIVITY. IT IS A HONOR TO PARTICIPATE IN YOUR CONTESTS. SINCERELY, ELAINE
Gass Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 7:45 AM
This is such a beautiful Cinqku, Brian! This leaves me with such an uplifting feeling, refreshed! Thank you for sharing and also the opportunity to participate in your contest! Love, Robin
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October 18, 2009 at 8:03 PM
Brian this ia a very lovely cinqku write, in imagery, tone, form, and flow, I have truly enjoyed the read my friend. I thank you for sharing and for your wonderfully insightful critiques... as wll as your lovely acknowledgement of my piece in your last contest. Your comments are most welcomed. :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
Richards Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 9:09 AM
I am back to say once again, many thanks for the acknowledgement in your last contest...for sponsoring new challenges that help us to stretch our imaginations. Thank you Brian, and looking forward to seeing what your new contest is all about! Best Wishes. Love, Carrie
Golden Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 12:41 AM
This is a wonderful example of how just a few words can express deep truths in a beautiful way. Excellent write, Brian! Hugs, Donna
Richards Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 8:25 AM
Your own spiritual river runs deep, and you share so much of those wonderful, crystal clear waters with your friends! Thank you once again for your uplifting words! ~ Love, Carrie
Jenkins Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 7:37 AM
COOL! IMPRESSIVE!
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 3:36 AM
Very impressive work. Keep writing. Sara
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October 17, 2009 at 2:53 AM
Such a spiritual write right here. Very interesting write, so is its form. Thank you for sharing. Love, Sami.
Moreno Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 2:49 AM
Beautiful picture painted in words. So true, nice work...Raul
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