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River Dance

Laughing at the sun
While dancing down the river
Lazy leaves just flow

Brenda Meier-Hans
26.08.2014
1st place win

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FJ Thomas

Date: 4/18/2018 6:08:00 PM

Brenda your haiku is beautiful! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2015 5:14:00 PM

BRENDA:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~

Len Gasun

Date: 9/8/2014 8:02:00 AM

Very beautiful and refreshing! Congratulations on your win my dear friend , Brenda. Cheers and hugs! love lots, Leonora

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/8/2014 9:03:00 AM

Thanks Leonora.

David Mohn

Date: 9/7/2014 7:27:00 PM

Love the feel of this one...congrats

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/7/2014 8:27:00 PM

Thanks David.

Judy Konos

Date: 9/7/2014 6:46:00 AM

Oil Painting with words!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/7/2014 1:11:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Judy. Glad you enjoyed reading this.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2014 5:28:00 AM

- Beautiful haiku Brenda! - Well deserved .... 1st place !!! - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/7/2014 1:10:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Anne Lise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2014 10:36:00 PM

such a delightful one. BIG congrats to you

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/7/2014 1:08:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/6/2014 10:53:00 AM

this is one of my favorites. Congratulations.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 2:42:00 PM

Thanks so much Maurice.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/6/2014 9:04:00 AM

I love your lazy leaves. congrats on a BIG win. BG

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 2:41:00 PM

Wrong spot oops. Thanks Barbara.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 2:40:00 PM

Thanks Faye.

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/6/2014 9:04:00 AM

A lovely winning haiku...congrats, Brenda.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 2:41:00 PM

?? Thank you too Faye.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/6/2014 7:38:00 AM

Congratulations, Brenda, on the Top of the Class win! Well deserved with beautiful imagery! Pandita

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 8:32:00 AM

Thanks for such a nice comment Pundits.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2014 6:45:00 AM

wonderful descriptive write Brenda many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/6/2014 11:05:00 AM

Any time Brenda - you inspire me! Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 8:32:00 AM

Hugs back Jan. Thanks for being here for me.

John Lawless

Date: 9/6/2014 6:40:00 AM

Brenda, wonderfully penned haiku, congrats on the win.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 8:31:00 AM

Thanks John.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2014 4:58:00 AM

Beautiful picture created with apt images, Congrats. Brenda

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 8:30:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Mehta.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/5/2014 11:37:00 PM

Wow Brenda love ur awesome haiku ! Lazy leaves flow is a lovely expression! Congrats on top win!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 8:29:00 AM

Thanks for such a nice complement.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 11:11:00 PM

Hello Brenda, I so love the imagery, amazing... Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 8:28:00 AM

So many thanks for such an honor.