River

Mighty arms of the bank hold Silent flowing clear music Ripples born and dead

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Kash Poet

Date: 12/17/2010 11:44:00 AM

Congrats Tahera on your well deserved win-kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Tahera

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2010 8:06:00 AM

Your wonderful haiku deserves to be in the winners' circle, Tahera. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 7:30:00 AM

Congrats Tahera on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water my friend.. enjoy today with luv..

Rick Parise

Date: 12/16/2010 10:04:00 PM

Congrats on you win in my contest!!!!~God bless ~Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 10:01:00 PM

This one is so lovely in its imagery, Tahera. Congratulations to you!

Kash Poet

Date: 12/14/2010 6:17:00 AM

Beautiful write.I liked the last line very much.Must be a winner-kashinath

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/13/2010 6:22:00 PM

sounds pretty, natural beauty in poetry!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/13/2010 1:12:00 PM

A magnificent image in your lovely haiku, Tahera. Surely a winner in the flowing water contest. Love, Carolyn

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/13/2010 12:42:00 PM

Hi. Thanks for your kind comment. As someone who has never lived anywhere that sea or river could not be seen I loved this. Water speaks to me as does this fine Haiku. Eamon

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/13/2010 7:10:00 AM

Good one Tahera..I love the short and to the point poems..BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/13/2010 5:34:00 AM

Interesting metaphorical thought on to create music. Tahera

Sundari Kannan

Date: 12/13/2010 4:23:00 AM

A very good one...searching for poems reached here ....sunkan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2010 4:00:00 AM

Good one..I don't know how I missed this..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2010 12:32:00 AM

OH, cool you used a metaphor, clear music. This is mystical. I enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea