River

Mighty arms of the bank hold
Silent flowing clear music
Ripples born and dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/17/2010 11:44:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your well deserved win-kashinath
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Date: 12/17/2010 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Tahera
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Date: 12/17/2010 8:06:00 AM
Your wonderful haiku deserves to be in the winners' circle, Tahera. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2010 7:30:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water my friend.. enjoy today with luv..
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Date: 12/16/2010 10:01:00 PM
This one is so lovely in its imagery, Tahera. Congratulations to you!
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:17:00 AM
Beautiful write.I liked the last line very much.Must be a winner-kashinath
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Date: 12/13/2010 6:22:00 PM
sounds pretty, natural beauty in poetry!
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Date: 12/13/2010 1:12:00 PM
A magnificent image in your lovely haiku, Tahera. Surely a winner in the flowing water contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:42:00 PM
Hi. Thanks for your kind comment. As someone who has never lived anywhere that sea or river could not be seen I loved this. Water speaks to me as does this fine Haiku. Eamon
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Date: 12/13/2010 7:10:00 AM
Good one Tahera..I love the short and to the point poems..BG
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Date: 12/13/2010 5:34:00 AM
Interesting metaphorical thought on to create music. Tahera
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Date: 12/13/2010 4:23:00 AM
A very good one...searching for poems reached here ....sunkan
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Date: 12/13/2010 4:00:00 AM
Good one..I don't know how I missed this..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:32:00 AM
OH, cool you used a metaphor, clear music. This is mystical. I enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea
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