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River

river's gentle flow nature's rhythm ebb and flow harmony aglow its surface serene melody of peaceful theme a symphony scheme under moonlit's gleam it sails in a tranquil dream stars cast shining beam branches and stones stand hindering its silent path yet it persists on who summoned the stream from glaciers to quench my thirst As dryness consumes why does the river descend hills and valleys' slope yearning for the sea

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Date: 3/14/2024 4:07:00 PM
excellent, Jay! What a harmonious and rhythmic poem that was contemplative of not just the river's purpose but perhaps our own. Like rivers, we poets yearn for our own sea (of creativity). Enjoyed your words...am faving...have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 3/14/2024 3:13:00 PM
Dear Jay, your poetic words beautifully captures the essence of nature's serene beauty and the eternal journey of water. The imagery of the river's gentle flow, harmonious rhythm, and tranquil dream under moonlit skies is evocative and soothing. I especially adore your contemplation of the river's purpose and its unwavering persistence despite obstacles reflects a deeper exploration of life's mysteries. Jay, what a peaceful and reflective piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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