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River

river's gentle flow
nature's rhythm ebb and flow
harmony aglow

its surface serene 
melody of peaceful theme
a symphony scheme 

under moonlit's gleam 
it sails in a tranquil dream
stars cast shining beam

branches and stones stand
hindering its silent path
yet it persists on

who summoned the stream
from glaciers to quench my thirst
As dryness consumes

why does the river
descend hills and valleys' slope
yearning for the sea

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Date: 3/14/2024 3:13:00 PM
Dear Jay, your poetic words beautifully captures the essence of nature's serene beauty and the eternal journey of water. The imagery of the river's gentle flow, harmonious rhythm, and tranquil dream under moonlit skies is evocative and soothing. I especially adore your contemplation of the river's purpose and its unwavering persistence despite obstacles reflects a deeper exploration of life's mysteries. Jay, what a peaceful and reflective piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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