Ritual of Us

Within the twilight of the witching hour,
where dreams mingled with reality,
your tongue, a sacred blade, flicks me open—
each unspoken word unfurling from your lips
presses against the ache of mine like a spell.
And I gasp—

my lungs filled with stardust sighs,
as explosions of nebulae grace the dark behind my eyes.
"The clouds parted like the pursed lips of desire".
In the gravity of your kiss, I taste the cosmos,
each particle a hymn of knowing:
there is no holier truth

than to be drawn into your orbit.
The hallucinogenic hymnal hums low,
and secrets spill from me like sacred offerings,
stoking the fire of our ritualistic ravaging.
Our souls swirl with stardust and cosmic lust,
entwined in divine disarray,

beaming through a haze of shimmering particles.
Essence entangles like twin serpents—
coiled hemipenes locked in a celestial trance,
rekindling the ancient flame.
I stitch my lifelines into your skin, silver-threaded,
a living scripture written in shimmering ink.

Within this realm of halcyon hymns,
we are a sensual sonata,
notes melting into ether
as we dissolve, waiting
for the encore of reincarnation.
Our new bodies form

from the shards of broken constellations,
and we descend once more
through heaven’s opalescent gate—
hopeful that fate's hand, in quiet mercy,
will place us again
into each other’s sacred embrace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jama Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 7:22 PM
Congratulations on your win my love. Your imagery is absolutely breathtaking. I am always in awe of your writing. Beautifully written.
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June 8, 2025 at 1:54 AM
Thank you my Onyx Rose, you inspire me to new heights. I would besiege the stars for you mi amor.
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June 7, 2025 at 7:16 PM
Angst mixed with rhythms of romance. Congrats!
Jama Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 1:54 AM
Thank you very muc, your support is greatly appreciated.
May Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Congrats on your win Billie, Very nicely done
Jama Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Thank you kindly for humbling me. I am deeply grateful.
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June 2, 2025 at 2:45 AM
How passionate and soulfully moving sis, i love the ending which emanates hope amidst all and the clever wordplay as well as your very lyrical alliterations and word pairings, truly impressive! I especially love the lines "my lungs filled with stardust sighs, as explosions of nebulae grace the dark behind my eyes. "The clouds parted like the pursed lips of desire"." Great use of the prompt! I find this prompt inspiring and youv used it so well here! A new fave for me! Best wishes, sending you light always
Jama Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 6:38 AM
Oh, Thank you for your lovely feedback. A revamped a piece I was working on months ago. And I thought it was a perfect pairing for this prompt. Thank you for your continued support. Sending you light to back.
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