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Ritual

under a carnelian sky, sand massaging the soles of adorned feet the romantic warrior observes the heavens everything must be in alignment, total peace dressed in breast plate bone, draped with jewels sacred beads resonate observing the horizon he is smiling that the gods are pleased they have created an illuminating moon guiding to that holy place, pinpointing where love is to be found silently outstretching his arm beckons her to come, and embrace the illumination she descends on a staircase of stars fluid deerskin gown, sea pearls woven in her thick hair regal yet soft her bejeweled choker resonates as she stands before him bone of adam silence placing her hand in his they walk, beat of drums, ancestors past, ring in their ears two sets of footprints engraved in sand the stars witnessed their love while the third set of footprints danced in joy

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Date: 6/12/2016 10:18:00 PM
Roberta, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/10/2016 8:18:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Roberta. :)
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Date: 6/9/2016 6:09:00 PM
Roberta, stunning........... :), Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Roberta Bisgyer
Date: 6/10/2016 6:07:00 AM
Thank you so much SKAT for your comments. I have only been writing for a little over 2 years and have no formal training. I go to a poetry group every Tuesdsy and that's where I have learned. I am a spiritual person who loves the moon. I use this in my poetry and I have a muse that lets my words flow . Nice to meet you ??
Date: 6/9/2016 12:01:00 PM
- A great first poem, Roberta ...... hope there will be many more in the future - Welcome to the Poetry Soup - hugs // Sun :)
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