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Rites Or Rights

A propensity for indiscretion
       wedded to transgression
       may lead to intercession --

         potential suppression
         ~ teen rites of expression

for teensfreedomsinmonorhyme

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

July 13, 2020 at 9:52 AM

I agree w/Kim ... a mind-bender muse placed in a thought blender, Gershon. Thirsty Soupers feel free to slurp G's poetic epiphany leisurely. Love and more love always.

Kim Rodrigues

July 12, 2020 at 11:54 AM

Thought provoking! No “restraint” in your writing :)

Gershon Wolf

July 12, 2020 at 4:51 PM

That's only because there no such noun as 'restrention!' (to rhyme with the others in this poem). lol. Thanks, Kim!

Caren Krutsinger

July 12, 2020 at 2:25 AM

I think you can pretty much throw the teens supression out the window these days though; nice try! Loved the rhymes.

Gershon Wolf

July 12, 2020 at 4:50 PM

'Teen suppression' will come back, amazingly enough, to some parts of this country. There's a profound backlash coming. Part of that will be back to 'basics.' Mark these words. The pendulum's swung way too far to the left. It's due to head right soon...

Harry Horsman

July 11, 2020 at 10:28 PM

One powerful message...

Gershon Wolf

July 12, 2020 at 4:42 PM

Thank you, Harry. I was a 'tower of power' on this one!~ Mighty Mouse

JC Brul

July 11, 2020 at 3:28 PM

A fine evocative piece! A must-read!

Gershon Wolf

July 11, 2020 at 10:24 PM

Thanks for the spirited comment, JCB! It happens that I agree completely with you, all false modesty aside... although it looks like we're out there on the edge of the proverbial teetering limb... No, Don't use the saw!... Ahhh!... Trees are overrated. lol. Thanks again, gw

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