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Rites Or Rights

A propensity for indiscretion wedded to transgression may lead to intercession -- potential suppression ~ teen rites of expression

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/13/2020 9:52:00 AM

I agree w/Kim ... a mind-bender muse placed in a thought blender, Gershon. Thirsty Soupers feel free to slurp G's poetic epiphany leisurely. Love and more love always.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/12/2020 11:54:00 AM

Thought provoking! No “restraint” in your writing :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/12/2020 4:51:00 PM

That's only because there no such noun as 'restrention!' (to rhyme with the others in this poem). lol. Thanks, Kim!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/12/2020 2:25:00 AM

I think you can pretty much throw the teens supression out the window these days though; nice try! Loved the rhymes.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/12/2020 4:50:00 PM

'Teen suppression' will come back, amazingly enough, to some parts of this country. There's a profound backlash coming. Part of that will be back to 'basics.' Mark these words. The pendulum's swung way too far to the left. It's due to head right soon...

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/11/2020 10:28:00 PM

One powerful message...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/12/2020 4:42:00 PM

Thank you, Harry. I was a 'tower of power' on this one!~ Mighty Mouse

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/11/2020 3:28:00 PM

A fine evocative piece! A must-read!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/11/2020 10:24:00 PM

Thanks for the spirited comment, JCB! It happens that I agree completely with you, all false modesty aside... although it looks like we're out there on the edge of the proverbial teetering limb... No, Don't use the saw!... Ahhh!... Trees are overrated. lol. Thanks again, gw