Nette Onclaud Poet Sonnet

Rites of Harvest Moon --Hexsonnetta

When harvest moon alights,
to sail like gauzy lace
on through a cloud’s embrace...
I watch her mystic rites,
as beaming, she excites
my lithesome hours of grace.

How glorious the view
atop a mountain crowned…
with lilies all around
that settle on her queue,
beguiling eve, anew
when sparklers reach the ground.

Till weaves of dawn advance
which ends fine Luna’s trance.


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Andrea Diterich's The HexSonnetta
Rhyme Scheme: a/bb/aa/b c/dd/cc/d ee 
~ the word glorious has 3 syl count~
8/22/2015

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Sara Kendrick September 28, 2015 at 3:34 PM Congrats on your winning..Way to go..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 21, 2015 at 2:05 AM Wonderful write nette n yet another superb win! Big congrats!

Kp Nunez September 20, 2015 at 11:20 AM Back to congratulate you, Nette. PS. Sorry for the typo on my previous comment...:-) huggs

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2015 at 4:42 PM As always, you have impressed with your imagery, Nette. BIG congrats in my contest.

Skat A September 19, 2015 at 4:21 PM Nette, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Sandra Haight September 19, 2015 at 3:26 PM Very lovely, Nette. Such soothing imagery that flows like a song. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus September 19, 2015 at 3:02 PM So very pleased to be back with congratulations, Nette! Yours has been a winning entry right from the start! Hugs // paul

Faye Gibson September 19, 2015 at 12:38 PM Lovely, lovely Luna; you did her justice, Nette. Beautiful. Congratulations.

Ralph Sergi September 19, 2015 at 11:47 AM Congratulations nette! I love which ends the luna's trance.

Jan Allison September 19, 2015 at 10:11 AM dropping back with mycongrats on your win Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez August 26, 2015 at 12:21 PM What a lovely HexSonnetta, Nette. Congrats on your POTS! Sorry, I don't know how I could have missed this. hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2015 at 2:31 PM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. dear Nette, August 23 - A beautiful poem ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish August 23, 2015 at 10:22 PM This is evocative work. I admire the craftsmanship in this poem and wish you good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

David Meade August 23, 2015 at 9:03 PM You have captured Luna's dance that fills the famers hearts with light and love.

Constance La France August 23, 2015 at 8:25 PM Nette, C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S ! on having this beauty selected as Poem Of The Day, enjoy the honor~~

James Inman August 23, 2015 at 4:34 PM Beautifully written, lovely meter.

Richard Lamoureux August 23, 2015 at 3:29 PM Way to go Nette! Congrats on poem of the day!

Eileen Manassian August 23, 2015 at 2:55 PM Congrats, Nette....This is enchanting and sweet. You really work magic with your words.... Hugs

Samiha Zubair August 23, 2015 at 1:03 PM Congratulations. Nature expressed in an awesome manner

Sandra Haight August 23, 2015 at 8:50 AM Nette, congratulations on your lovely poem being featured as Poem of the Day! Sandra

Eve Roper August 23, 2015 at 7:40 AM Wonderful write, Nette, congratulations on Poem of the Day hugs Eve

Jan Allison August 23, 2015 at 6:59 AM Dropping back to say congrats on Poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis August 23, 2015 at 4:56 AM I told you! Congratulations, dear nette! Happy for you!

James Peranteau August 22, 2015 at 11:29 PM aah, the supple soul, I can picture her there dear poet with her braid hanging with great length and the moon's beam causing her glory...sweet Nette...have a fantastical week my friend...much love, james

Sandra Haight August 22, 2015 at 6:52 PM Very lovely, Nette. You painted a spectacular picture with the magic of your words. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

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