Rispetto For a Friend In Need

RISPETTO   FOR   A   FRIEND   IN    NEED

There are lost souls who are tortured by mem’ry
And those who can never escape and  are  gripped
By   sin-cell-conscience,   a   guilt-filled library
Where volumes of  black  records  are never snipped.
Forgiveness is given by God, but the first 
Longing for break-out comes  from  their own great  thirst 
For justice and freedom and inner mind-peace
Where the dreams and nightmares and torture all cease.



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Written    for   Dr. Ram’s     RISPETTO       contest
Chosen rhyme scheme :          ababccdd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest.
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 4:55 AM
Congratulations Sydney, for the win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Rispetto". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 5:29 PM
Well rendered rispetto, Congratulations Sydney. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 4:55 PM
Congrats Sydney on your wonderful win in the Rispetto contest with this elegant entry luv.. enjoy ..superb as always...
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 4:19 PM
Good one...Congratulations on your win..Sara
Ruebel Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 2:31 PM
Hello Sydney, Congratulations on your win in Dr. Mehta's contest. This is a very touching and wonderful work. As Always, Shar
Haick Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your 7th Place win in the contest, Sydney. Always, Annalise
Devonshire Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 11:19 AM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Syd. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your #7 win. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in my contest, Sydney
Radke Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Excellent rispetto... Passionate and filled with truth and longing. Best of luck in the contest. Deb
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 3:06 PM
What an awesome way to write to a friend in need with such wise words of poetry, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 1:00 PM
If we could only learn to forgive ourselves as our Creator does, Syd, the guilt-filled libraries would vanish. I hope I can achieve this goal so the nightmares end. A deep and moving rispetto for Dr. Ram's contest, my friend. It's surely a winner. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 12:10 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Sydney
Situation Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 11:42 AM
In my battle which it seemed I could not win that had lasted for three years. It was'nt untill I ask Him to take the pain away. and slowly but surely He did. T. S.
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