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Rising Sea

Only if I could follow the sea, Excursion of a lifetime spree, Appreciate beauty of waters surround, And drift along the tides spellbound ! The day I was lost in middle of the blue, How faraway the land, had least clue, Gathered courage of a buoyant swim, When water filled the lungs to brim, Uplifting waves had potential in store, Threw me out of deep waters ashore, Zest to thrive if in life is too high, Even Deeper seas can touch the skies, Nature plays turbulence to rise galore, Positive attitude in life takes you furore ! Written on 6/7/14 Contest- Encore- anonymous positive new sonnet Sponsor- Elly Wouterse Awarded 3rd place Now entered for "100 in a row contest-8" by PD A

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2016 8:47:00 PM

Dr Upma, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest --- 101 in a row. :) Stop by my blog "They Hang Horses, Don't They?" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/4/2014 2:46:00 PM

Wonderful example of some things we go through in. Being positive is so important. Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2014 10:55:00 PM

Dr Upma, you are very talented.. LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 9/3/2014 6:31:00 PM

I love this sonnet, Upma, where you look at life with a positive attitude. You captivate me with the line: "Even Deeper seas can touch the skies". Congratulations! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 9/3/2014 6:02:00 PM

many congratulations on your win with this uplifting sonnet:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/3/2014 8:32:00 AM

A great sonnet. Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/3/2014 8:46:00 AM

Thnx Maurice ! U r so very kind!