Rising From the Ashes

The wear and tear of my past experience
has ravaged my spirit, body and soul
Now my life is a mere shallow existence
with a deep longing to be made whole

I was caught in the beauty of your charm
and savouring its full pleasure was my goal
Now I experience a deep sense of alarm
at the loss of my feeling of control

But with my own inner resolve and firmness
and the strength I can get from other avenues
I must overcome this sense of helplessness
and move on to live my life as I choose

The phoenix bird burns itself to ashes
whenever it becomes worn out with age
And from those ashes a new phoenix arises
and starts a fresh life cycle on a new page

Scorched and burned by my actions of the past
and having learned from the anguish and pain 
I also will rise from those ashes at last
and move on afresh with my own life again



(To those dealing with addiction – drugs, alcohol, etc., 
and also a broken heart)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 6, 2014 at 10:51 PM
THANK YOU FOR THE REPLY
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July 29, 2014 at 1:59 PM
John, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA
Beharry Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Thanks Linda, for your kind remarks. Best Wishes to you!
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Congrats on a great win, John my friend.. Love the story this phoenix tells.. Hugs.. Arlene
Beharry Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:00 PM
Thank you, Arlene for your congrats. Have a pleasant day1
Mehta Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:06 AM
Very true and creative write, John. Congrats
Beharry Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 8:58 PM
Thank you, Dr Mehta for your kind remarks. Have a nice day!
Johnson Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 11:42 PM
A commendable aspiration well penned. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Beharry Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 8:57 PM
Thanks, Joyce. Best wishes to you.
Deschler Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:09 PM
A wonderful personification of the mythical phoenix!.... Your words are uplifting and so inspiring, John. Lovely rhyming in this, as well! Congrats on your win!
Beharry Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Thank you, Kelly for sponsoring the contest, and my placement. Have a wonderful day!
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