Rising From the Ashes

The wear and tear of my past experience
has ravaged my spirit, body and soul
Now my life is a mere shallow existence
with a deep longing to be made whole

I was caught in the beauty of your charm
and savouring its full pleasure was my goal
Now I experience a deep sense of alarm
at the loss of my feeling of control

But with my own inner resolve and firmness
and the strength I can get from other avenues
I must overcome this sense of helplessness
and move on to live my life as I choose

The phoenix bird burns itself to ashes
whenever it becomes worn out with age
And from those ashes a new phoenix arises
and starts a fresh life cycle on a new page

Scorched and burned by my actions of the past
and having learned from the anguish and pain 
I also will rise from those ashes at last
and move on afresh with my own life again



(To those dealing with addiction – drugs, alcohol, etc., 
and also a broken heart)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/6/2014 10:51:00 PM
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Date: 7/29/2014 1:59:00 PM
John, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA
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John Beharry
Date: 7/31/2014 9:03:00 PM
Thanks Linda, for your kind remarks. Best Wishes to you!
Date: 7/28/2014 7:01:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, John my friend.. Love the story this phoenix tells.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, Arlene for your congrats. Have a pleasant day1
Date: 7/28/2014 1:06:00 AM
Very true and creative write, John. Congrats
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John Beharry
Date: 7/31/2014 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Dr Mehta for your kind remarks. Have a nice day!
Date: 7/27/2014 11:42:00 PM
A commendable aspiration well penned. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/31/2014 8:57:00 PM
Thanks, Joyce. Best wishes to you.
Date: 7/27/2014 8:09:00 PM
A wonderful personification of the mythical phoenix!.... Your words are uplifting and so inspiring, John. Lovely rhyming in this, as well! Congrats on your win!
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John Beharry
Date: 7/31/2014 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Kelly for sponsoring the contest, and my placement. Have a wonderful day!
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