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we rise although gravity and time may hold us in the cupping of their hands we rise in a plethora of dreams escaping above the vents of circumstance we rise into the tent of all embracing; and as if, and but, and still we rise into each contemplation new as the reckoning of togetherness draws us to the breath of our existence; rising, always rising to meet the air of every day to stay through every active play and to meet what will become. the beauty of this world so much, that I must blink with astonishment to hold back tears. If I could not blink I fear, sixty per cent of who I am, would leave me, in abject eagerness, to kiss the earth.

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