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RISING

Rising I rise to see the rising of our sun, ‘tho only To begin with, a fat quarter of her, For she is in great part hidden, Blocked by a line of trees. She comes… A spark of flame Inching higher above the horizon Before my eyes, presenting her face: A pulsing, glowing nectarine orange With a thin, berry-red rim, Beneath the still winking Dozns of stars — Only a minute from disappearing, Taking away the remains Of the night that brought the day… Until, as I write, the sun rises to Nearly fully round, But she now wears a mask — Appearing not like our sun, but Instead, like a sister moon With her hot colors blanched, to look out Wth a mother-of-pearl face Made so before me by a wind-blown Stream of clouds skimming Past the line of trees Whose new, Spring-born leaves, I can see in silhouette, Quivering… (c) s.y.eslinger 5/22/2024

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Date: 5/28/2024 6:53:00 AM
Sally, thanks for this one. The sunrise you observe is a wonder. The light path with the sun on the horizon scatters much of the blue light and leaves us with an orange ball we can still look at and admire. Not so many can get up early and observe all of these happenings and changes. You describe them with love and adoration.
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Date: 5/26/2024 10:29:00 PM
The last word highlights this beautifully Sally In the U K right now our weather is amost wintry Some days..or some parts of them.I hear its Geo engineering? As the w e f puppets move Against Gods pattern for the weather..trying To ruin the farmers some say.?
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:24:00 AM
You describe sunrise as so beautiful.
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Date: 5/24/2024 10:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Rising" write. Have a great day/weekend.....................
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Date: 5/23/2024 7:46:00 PM
The writing had a powerful effect, and I greatly valued the perceptive viewpoints, Sally. The wonder and beauty of the morning, the sun's slow arrival from behind a row of trees, its shifting hues, and how its look changes as it rises is breathtaking.
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Date: 5/23/2024 5:24:00 PM
beautiful and masterfully created imagery. Your poem was more than captivating. I felt like I was on a journey with your from night until day...and it was delightful. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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