RISING

Rising

I rise to see the rising of our sun,  ‘tho only
To begin with, a fat quarter of her,
For she is in great  part hidden,
Blocked by a line of trees.  She comes…
 A spark of flame 
Inching higher above the horizon 
Before my eyes,  presenting her face: 
A pulsing, glowing  nectarine orange
With a thin, berry-red rim,
Beneath  the still winking
 Dozns of stars  — 
  Only a minute from disappearing,
Taking away the remains 
Of the night that brought the day…
Until, as I write, the sun rises to
Nearly fully round, 
But she now wears a mask — 
Appearing not like our sun, but
Instead, like a sister moon
With her hot colors blanched, to look out
Wth a mother-of-pearl face
 Made so before me by a wind-blown 
Stream of clouds  skimming 
Past the line of trees
Whose new, Spring-born leaves, 
I can see in silhouette,
Quivering…

  



(c) s.y.eslinger 5/22/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Beaufort Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 6:53 AM
Sally, thanks for this one. The sunrise you observe is a wonder. The light path with the sun on the horizon scatters much of the blue light and leaves us with an orange ball we can still look at and admire. Not so many can get up early and observe all of these happenings and changes. You describe them with love and adoration.
Maverick Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 10:29 PM
The last word highlights this beautifully Sally In the U K right now our weather is amost wintry Some days..or some parts of them.I hear its Geo engineering? As the w e f puppets move Against Gods pattern for the weather..trying To ruin the farmers some say.?
Buhagiar Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 2:24 AM
You describe sunrise as so beautiful.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 10:28 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Rising" write. Have a great day/weekend.....................
Poet Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 7:46 PM
The writing had a powerful effect, and I greatly valued the perceptive viewpoints, Sally. The wonder and beauty of the morning, the sun's slow arrival from behind a row of trees, its shifting hues, and how its look changes as it rises is breathtaking.
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