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Rising

Like an oath to quit Or a plague from below I become blindfolded To the sickening Pain Deep in the soul Dark hate Consumes Her heart Like a black hole In the universe Of life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/14/2008 4:28:00 PM
Yes, hate does consume--creative way of forwarding that message. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/14/2008 8:17:00 AM
Hello Jes welcome to poetry soup.Live long enough and situations will rise.Rising builds character. continue to write. B BLESS Crystal
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