Rise, Die, Shine

Build me a temple high…high…high up where the sun can rise
Where good can shine and the evil die as a plant in winter time.
Let it rise
Let it die 
Let it shine
Build it high up the moon
But under the sky
And let the sun shine
Through the skin that dims inner light
Let the light unfold the eyes
And see the beauty inside of this small world that wants to shine
Let the war be the plant that could die in winter time
Let it rise
Let peace in the world rise
High…high up like a bird flying up to the sky
Let it die
Let hate die
As a phoenix and be reborn as a flower
Full of scents and beauty instead.
Let it shine
Let our inner light shine
Let it shine through our skin and show us that we can light up the way without hate and 
without pain
Let it rise
Let it die
Let it shine
Let the battle field turn into a garden
Let the soldiers be the flowers
And the ammunition be the fertilizing soil
Build me a temple high…high up the sky
To symbolize world peace.
Don’t rush take your time 
until we find out that we can shine
Let our soul rise
Let our evil die
Let our ability to find world peace shine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 20, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Wow this is good too. Congratz
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October 6, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Yesica, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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October 4, 2009 at 1:02 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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September 30, 2009 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations on your featured write.God Bless Phyl
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September 30, 2009 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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September 26, 2009 at 11:23 AM
PS--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 25, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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September 24, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Good message in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Vesica, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 24, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Yesica. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2009 at 8:39 AM
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR CONGRATULATIONS. I AM THRILLED TO HAVE MY POEM FEATURED IS MY SECOND ONE! THIS IS LIKE A DREAM COME TRUE, HAVING PEOPLE READING MY POETRY AND ENJOYING IT. THANK YOU
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September 24, 2009 at 7:18 AM
Dear Yesica, Congatulations on this well derserved feature of the week. Lainie
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September 24, 2009 at 4:33 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Yesica. Love, Carol
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