Unknown Person Poet Quatrain

Rise Above It

With sort of papers bend
I can see it THE END
Though trembling unseen
Like forgot everything it seems

Heart and pen are at sync
Trying to overcome those obstacles
Struggling that horrible fight
As if fear had hold me tight

It's all broken ,there is rage
And confine in tag of failure cage
Yeah I am lost in maze 
Fallen with every page

Even life is difficult to cope
But I won't lose it THAT HOPE
I'll aim straight for my success
Failing won't stop me from rising above

I will try try until I succeed
Won't let this failure breed
I 'll root it our like a weed 
Then blossom with efforts in new seed

A sheet of paper can't decide my future after all
One never becomes failure with one fall
Summoning knowledge and peace
That's my very aim for top to cease

I shall rise above it,I will rise above it

12 June 2016

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Meenakshi Raina June 15, 2016 at 1:37 PM Very nicely written....and thanks for visiting my page....appreciate your lovely comments... Unknown Person June 16, 2016 at 1:51 AM Thankyou..your poems are really something

Weston Gregory June 15, 2016 at 12:23 AM A very strong affirmation I admire your Use of word to tell a message. Very good Unknown Person June 16, 2016 at 1:51 AM Thankyou.....

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2016 at 3:31 PM Nicely done. I especially like the final verse. Unknown Person June 16, 2016 at 1:49 AM That one is my fav. too..

Abdiel Rios June 13, 2016 at 11:52 AM Really like this poem I like the part "I will try try until I succeed Won't let this failure breed" good job keep on writing Unknown Person June 14, 2016 at 1:32 AM thankyou..I really liked that pic of kaneki ken of tokyo ghouls

Afolabi Muideen June 13, 2016 at 5:39 AM A wonderful and pretty write...... You shall rise above the ladder, AMEN. I enjoy reading your poem..........A.M. Unknown Person June 14, 2016 at 1:33 AM Thankyou..yeah I will...

Eve Roper June 12, 2016 at 3:28 PM A wonderful write with feeling, Lekhika, and the voice gave it life. Good luck in the contest. Bless you Eve Unknown Person June 12, 2016 at 11:12 PM Thankyou...I will keep that in mind..~blessed~..

Mike Hauser June 12, 2016 at 8:56 AM So moving hearing you read this wonderfully inspiring poem! Unknown Person June 12, 2016 at 11:17 PM thankyou..~blessed~...