Tonye George Poet Rhyme

Rise

Again friend, when your hope
flamboyantly skedaddles creamy, gleamy scope
                        tears that tear

                        The Universe
         reverse your present with presents 
                             believe!

                        Breathe through
                    the breath of lead
                                rise!!

              Again friend, when your dreams
        reverse your present with presents
                                rise!!

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Silent One December 11, 2023 at 12:55 PM This is a deep minichu.. I hope the judge of the contest appreciates it.. Tonye George December 11, 2023 at 3:02 PM I hope so too, I'm just trying. Thank you for your immense support silent.

Ink Empress December 11, 2023 at 12:44 PM Oh beautiful write dear tonye. Your minuchu is moving: Your last stanza conveys a profound and inspiring message. I loved it. Pleasure reading you always . Best wishes if its for the contest Tonye George December 11, 2023 at 3:03 PM The pleasure is mine ink. Thank you.