Ripples In the Pond

Tiny little waves linger on top of grandma’s pond, they wrinkle and crimp with each shift of water- Of this reverie on Lake Michigan I’ve always been fond, and now I get to travel there and show my daughter. Ruffles and ridges, pleats without an end in sight, such beautiful movement in each corrugation- You should see the rush in the fresh morn’ light, they billow and shine, what a wonderful creation. Gathering together like momma’s quilt made by hand, furrowing and folding with each adoring dimple- I remember watching the pond from the dry land, man, life used to be so serene, so completely simple. I’d sink my toes in the pebbles while feeling the ebb flow, gentle motions of the water arising up to my calf- We’d sing and dance with each surges high and low, the tingling sensation always made us giggle and laugh. Tiny little waves linger on top of grandma’s pond, each ripple setting the scene for the next stream- Back then my sisters and I shared such a great bond, now those ripples are nothing but a long-lost dream. August 29, 2017

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Date: 9/16/2017 5:23:00 PM
Laura congratulations on your win with the well done and amazing write
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Date: 9/15/2017 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations Laura :)
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Date: 9/15/2017 1:52:00 AM
congrats on your win LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2017 11:44:00 PM
congratulations, Laura! such lush descriptions!
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Date: 9/14/2017 9:37:00 PM
Wonderfully-penned and so gorgeously-phrased, Laura - I adore this one! Blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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Date: 8/30/2017 8:08:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Luloo--especially the quilt simile! Congrats. Janice
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Date: 8/29/2017 11:06:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura. Dreams always ripple away.
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Date: 8/29/2017 5:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win, luloo.
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Date: 8/29/2017 4:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win Laura
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Date: 8/29/2017 11:39:00 AM
Lovely journey through the memory lane, Good luck for the contest!
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Date: 8/29/2017 7:34:00 AM
Well pictured memories, LuLoo:)
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