Ripples In a Pond

ripples in a pond pebbles dropped without a thought somewhere children cry Barbara Gorelick Philosophical small poem

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Joanna Smith

Date: 3/29/2014 8:48:00 PM

This is beautiful. Great write.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/29/2014 8:59:00 PM

Thank you so much. I am a fan of the short forms and glad you liked it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2014 12:58:00 AM

barbara, sometimes you come up with the best haiku. This is one of them!! Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2014 12:25:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Barbara. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 2/28/2014 11:47:00 AM

Barbara, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Awesome and amazing win :) Luv ~SKAT~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2014 8:54:00 AM

Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, barbara

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/28/2014 9:19:00 AM

Thank you Dr...Not so impressive in the end I guess.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/28/2014 8:44:00 AM

Congrats Barbara on the win . A brilliant one indeed.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/28/2014 9:20:00 AM

Thank you...I appreciate you stopping by.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/26/2014 4:39:00 PM

Dear Barbara 7 ... 3 Volumes in only three lines. Masterful trilogy! My best, chuck

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/25/2014 11:39:00 PM

It's a small poem, but it says a lot. Good write, Barbara.