Ripples In a Pond

ripples in a pond pebbles dropped without a thought somewhere children cry
Barbara Gorelick Philosophical small poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 8:48 PM
This is beautiful. Great write.
Gorelick Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 8:59 PM
Thank you so much. I am a fan of the short forms and glad you liked it.
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 12:58 AM
barbara, sometimes you come up with the best haiku. This is one of them!! Congrats on your win.
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 12:25 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Barbara. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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February 28, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Barbara, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Awesome and amazing win :) Luv ~SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, barbara
Gorelick Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Dr...Not so impressive in the end I guess.
Kayode Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Congrats Barbara on the win . A brilliant one indeed.
Gorelick Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Thank you...I appreciate you stopping by.
Melugin Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Dear Barbara 7 ... 3 Volumes in only three lines. Masterful trilogy! My best, chuck
Pettit Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 11:39 PM
It's a small poem, but it says a lot. Good write, Barbara.
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