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Ripples Fade

Ripples fade on shore as there will be next to fade like a shipwrecked soul who risks and writhes in defeat like a dropping leaf on scream 12.19.17 "Stunner 2017" hosted by Line Third Place

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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/15/2018 8:50:00 AM
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Very concisely written! Really, the only separation between ourselves and the rest of nature is consciousness--not theirs, but ours. The leaf and fields are well aware of our existence, as are our fabricated constructions....yet man and God remain at a block.
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Moon Flower
Date: 5/21/2018 12:17:00 PM
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Love this comment. Very profound, my friend. ;) Many thanks!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2018 4:47:00 AM
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- A great 3rd place in the contest, congratulations, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Moon Flower
Date: 5/21/2018 12:15:00 PM
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Thank you for the kind words, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/19/2018 9:55:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win.
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Moon Flower
Date: 5/21/2018 12:14:00 PM
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Thank you, Susan. :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/19/2018 5:15:00 PM
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Thanks for entering my contest, Moon Flower, with this obscure poem. Congrats on your bronze medal win.
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Moon Flower
Date: 4/19/2018 8:35:00 PM
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Thank you, Line. :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/9/2018 3:09:00 PM
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I like how you combined nature and parting in this one tanka, Moon Flower. I don't think this one ever got judged yet, did it? Good luck to you.
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Moon Flower
Date: 1/25/2018 10:18:00 AM
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Thank you, Andrea. Still waiting for the 'judge' at this time though. =)
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Joseph May
Date: 12/21/2017 5:25:00 PM
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Nicely penned Moon Flower ..best wishes
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Moon Flower
Date: 12/22/2017 2:21:00 AM
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Thank you, my friend. Best wishes as well.
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James Inman
Date: 12/20/2017 7:19:00 AM
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Beautiful images Moon Flower.
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Moon Flower
Date: 12/21/2017 8:45:00 AM
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Thank you, James. :)
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Silent One
Date: 12/19/2017 7:36:00 AM
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Excellent tanka, one of the best I have read...
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Moon Flower
Date: 12/19/2017 11:43:00 AM
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Thank you, S.O. :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/19/2017 4:35:00 AM
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- Lovely written, Moon Flower - Luck in the contest - Merry Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Moon Flower
Date: 12/19/2017 11:42:00 AM
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Thank you Anne-Lise. Best wishes! :)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/18/2017 1:35:00 PM
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Awe inducing pen! Fave & my best to you in the contest ~*€
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Moon Flower
Date: 12/18/2017 1:49:00 PM
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Thank you for the kind words, Maureen. :)

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