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Ripples

Scorched By gloom On burnt dunes, A rippling curve Of fresh oasis quells my arid heart. For Language of Water Contest Posted 7 Dec 2015, by Ashley Conte --Oasis--

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Date: 12/14/2015 9:33:00 PM
ASHLEY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 12/11/2015 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations Ashley.
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Date: 12/10/2015 10:46:00 PM
Congrats on wonderful write n win Ashley!
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Date: 12/10/2015 7:34:00 AM
Very nice, very imaginative, Ashley.
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Date: 12/10/2015 3:48:00 AM
great symbolism, ashley...sweet , high congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs
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