Ripples

Rain pours
Thunder pounds
Light races time
Rippling streams wash over
Renew


Shannon Deane
June 4th, 2011
Contest: Write me a Rippling stream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/17/2011 6:41:00 AM
And i also thought the name,, shannon,, was female...lol... and this was a very fine win,,, have you checked out my newest contest... it is up on the blogs... you should stop by... and tell me to give you a poetry assignmnet,.... waiting to hear from you,..p.d.
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Shannon. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Shannon
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Date: 6/6/2011 7:17:00 AM
Congrats Shannon on your win with this beautiful write..
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:33:00 PM
congratulations Shannon with your win in my contest with this lovely poem~
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:04:00 PM
cheers to you, shannon for the happy win! :) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:53:00 PM
Congrats Shannon on your exciting win in Constance's contest with this wonderful write ..enjoy with luv ...excellent..
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Date: 6/5/2011 1:53:00 PM
She sure can devestate her beautiful lands, whilst she can renew her strife. I agree with SKAT, it's koolio :)
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:09:00 PM
very cool cinqku i like it lots Luv*Skat
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