Ripples

Rain pours
Thunder pounds
Light races time
Rippling streams wash over
Renew


Shannon Deane
June 4th, 2011
Contest: Write me a Rippling stream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 17, 2011 at 6:41 AM
And i also thought the name,, shannon,, was female...lol... and this was a very fine win,,, have you checked out my newest contest... it is up on the blogs... you should stop by... and tell me to give you a poetry assignmnet,.... waiting to hear from you,..p.d.
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June 9, 2011 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Shannon. Love, Carol
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June 6, 2011 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Shannon
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June 6, 2011 at 7:17 AM
Congrats Shannon on your win with this beautiful write..
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June 5, 2011 at 10:33 PM
congratulations Shannon with your win in my contest with this lovely poem~
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June 5, 2011 at 10:04 PM
cheers to you, shannon for the happy win! :) huggs
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June 5, 2011 at 8:53 PM
Congrats Shannon on your exciting win in Constance's contest with this wonderful write ..enjoy with luv ...excellent..
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June 5, 2011 at 1:53 PM
She sure can devestate her beautiful lands, whilst she can renew her strife. I agree with SKAT, it's koolio :)
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June 4, 2011 at 1:09 PM
very cool cinqku i like it lots Luv*Skat
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