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ripples

times carve on calm lakes thoughts that no one understands ~ warm waters weave whims

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Date: 5/27/2025 4:33:00 PM
Nice haiku - ripples over time and thinking seem to go together.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/28/2025 12:27:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/26/2025 2:56:00 PM
I loved this enchanting work. I read this many times trying to glean more, even when line two told me that beautiful cannot be fully understood.. sometimes it’s just there to behold. Your work held me. Thank you for that gift, Chris!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/26/2025 11:12:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/26/2025 6:18:00 AM
That second line takes the haiku to a different level. Very nice Chris
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/26/2025 9:05:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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