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Ripple Vanishes Dream

up side down avalanche's image reflects in still blue liquid mirror's glassy chest pedestrian's head touching the sky within silvery hill catches to add more beauty when a leaf falls on ripple vanishes dream

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/2/2017 6:17:00 PM

I also found this poem to be sad. It is a well written poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/21/2017 10:56:00 PM

a sorrowful ending penned by a soulful heart. lovely writing. many blessings to you xo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/30/2017 12:54:00 PM

- A little sad write my friend Bl, but beautifully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/8/2017 3:50:00 PM

A little sad indeed my dear lovely friend. In life sometimes beautiful dream gets vanished. Thanks for your beautiful comment my dear lovely friend. Loved always, bl