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Ripple Effect

Your hard heart is a skipping grave stone traveling over troubled water The consequences of sin is rippling out on fleshly tear surfaces Those wicked actions of yours have touched a lot of people indirectly Waves of weeping hurt keeps spreading out Foaming out your shame, as the sin stone skips across the muddy water Skip ... skip ... skip With each skip of the sin stone, the multiplying of transgressions radially ripples along outward And your soul inevitably will sink downward Feel the ripple effect take effect Sin’s gonna make you drown in wet regret Pull your soul undertow with a heavy concrete block of pain Ripple effect taking effect once again This will be engraved on your skipping burial headstone: You skimmed over a lot of watery warnings — but causing the ripple effect, you never once did atone

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Date: 5/25/2017 7:59:00 AM
Wow, this is a powerful write Freddie. Well written, and I really enjoyed it. A7+ Maria
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Date: 5/23/2017 11:43:00 AM
Very well done Freddie! There are those with a hardened heart seeming to have no conscience continually skipping that stone.
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Date: 5/23/2017 11:06:00 AM
We can change a tire, but can't change people. If they are capable, they might have an epiphany which can lead to recovering a damaged soul, or at the very least, their peace of mind. I will not seek vengeance for what had been done to me. I am able to forgive, but unable to forget; it had been a harrowing lesson! Keep well and stay on that path of light that you'd wished for me! Things are more clear and brighter there.:) Best ever wishes, Mikki
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Date: 5/23/2017 11:05:00 AM
Freddie, This poem grabbed me from the very first line. Powerful write. Some people have no soul. The hurt they inflict on others can be devastating.
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