Ripped From Me

i was to blind to see
what you ripped from me
you ripped my peace
you ripped my love
and you killed everything
now i am above
i gave up
and i dont exist
you hurt me so bad
i had to get away from it
this is the end
as we see
i am in the coffin
all because of thee
you tore me down
you destroyed my peace
you built me up
just to demolish me
i dont understand
why would you do this to me
what all i did
was keep you company
keep you happy
love you
and care for you
but now i dont know
what to do
so i just left it 
all to you
and what do you do
just ripped it from me
tore me in pieces
and threw them away from me
my love and life
both separated
when they are both supposed to be intertwined
i didn't die 
not physically
but mentally
i gave up any way 
let me live j\
just for family
friends maybe
but not personally
if it was for me
i wouldnt live any way
it hurt to much
feeling the pain
raise in me
but you dont see
cause you are happy
another man
another person
who you will rip 
and destroy inside
why collect hearts
and destroy them one by one
while you keep one
and love it with your life?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/10/2013 3:02:00 PM
That's women for you Dylan lol.nicely written and personified. Take care, Richard
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Dylan Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 3:26:00 PM
hey i am deeply sorry i didnt write so much this week. it is cause i have school and home work to do .
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