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Ripped And Dipped

She had wanted to go the beach And yet, she was scheduled to teach Her swimsuit had ripped So she skinny-dipped Could this be a test of free speech?

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2024 1:28:00 PM

Could be? Thanks for sharing your humor with us. Sara K

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/6/2024 6:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara xxoo

Karen Jones

Date: 9/13/2024 5:28:00 AM

Well if nothing else the “girls” were free without a bathing suit lol! Fun limerick! As strict as society is on teachers if found out she likely will be job free! ;0) Love this! Belated congratulations on your win!

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/26/2024 11:56:00 AM

Thank you Karen xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/25/2024 11:05:00 AM

Hello Mike, i think she is embarrassed because her swim suit ripped. Happy Sunday. xxxxxx-oooooo. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/26/2024 12:00:00 PM

Hello Mike. Happy Monday. I hope all is well with you. xxxx-oooo./Darlene/

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/26/2024 5:18:00 AM

Thank you Darlene, Happy Monday xxoo

Terry Miller

Date: 8/22/2024 1:49:00 AM

Very funny, congratulations

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/23/2024 3:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Terry!!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2024 2:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. Hope this was Not a family beach. Hahaha!!!! Have a fun day writing away....................

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/20/2024 10:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Paula xxoo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2024 9:54:00 AM

Mike, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/20/2024 10:37:00 AM

Thank you Tania, I am so happy that you liked it!!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/3/2024 1:48:00 AM

Loved your humorous limerick, Mike. Best for a win.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/8/2024 4:05:00 PM

Thank you Victor!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/2/2024 7:14:00 AM

Well she wouldn't look out of place on a nudist beach lol. Good luck in the contest Mike and enjoy your weekend. Tom

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/2/2024 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Tom, A happy weekend to you as well!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/1/2024 7:38:00 PM

Actually, I think it's a different one of the 'four freedoms,' Mike: The freedom to assemble and to disassemble! What say you?! ~ gw

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/2/2024 4:26:00 AM

That could be GW, I wonder!!! Thanks!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/1/2024 6:28:00 PM

Lol. Funny one! :) Happy Thursday :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/2/2024 4:25:00 AM

Thank you Heidi xxoo

Ink Empress

Date: 8/1/2024 1:47:00 PM

Hah best solution, just go with the waves where ever the wind may take her. Brilliant rhymes and wordplay here and the last line is worth one to ponder upon in this world where times all about free speech! Clever and very witty dear mike. Love your limerick. Well delivered with picturesque imagery too

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/1/2024 2:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Ink Empress xxoo

Silent One

Date: 8/1/2024 1:27:00 PM

Ha! good one! You should enter it in the funny summer contest..

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/1/2024 2:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Silent One!

Tom Woody

Date: 8/1/2024 5:35:00 AM

I don't know about free speech but she's certainly feeling freer ;)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/1/2024 2:13:00 PM

That’s for sure, thanks Tom!!