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Apple Picking contest by R J Liguori ~ October 2, 2023

Johnny walked the countryside, sowing apple seeds A healthy fruit, doctors say everyone has daily needs He succeeded in his mission across America's frontier Along his chosen path, apple trees would soon appear From early September until Autumn days of October these are known to be the best days for apple picking It's considered to be the peak of harvesting season before they all become over ripe. The clock is ticking At the beginning of Fall, brisk breezes begin to blow Leaf colors start to change and in the air there's a chill That's the time to visit orchards with baskets and crates Be sure to bring lots of containers so you can get your fill Make it a fun family outing that seems like an adventure It'd be a fantastic idea not to leave your children at home because they'd be handy to pick good ones off the ground Maybe juicy Fujis, Granny Smiths, or the beauteous Rome Start by finding a tree whose branches are heavy with fruit weighed down and laden with a crop that'll be delicious. Very gently, twist the stems from the limb with your wrist It's a worthwhile task to collect food that's so nutritious Don't forget to bring a ladder for those that are hard to reach Careful not to bruise them so they'll be in good shape to eat Bake them in a tasty pie, crisp, cobbler or an apple strudel or dip them in caramel coating for a yummy Halloween treat

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Date: 10/5/2023 12:25:00 AM
Enjoyed this apple picking expedition. Everything needed for a great harvest of apples, you have mentioned. Here in our tropical climate, apples don't grow. So never had this experience. Love apples dipped in caramel coating ! A lovely poem Lin...
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Date: 10/4/2023 10:18:00 AM
Spectacular penning, Lin:-) Looks like a definite winner to me!
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:26:00 PM
Can imagine how wonderful it would be, Lin!!
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Date: 10/2/2023 11:53:00 AM
Brilliant Lin, takes me back to my childhood of climbing over neighbours fences to grab a few apples, and getting chased away, but your poem says much more than that, you are gentle and nurture the orchard, and show a lot of insight into the proper way of handling and processing the prized fruit, great one for contest, cheers David
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