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Corseted like a buxom women in deathly white with orbs ripe. Pierced with stem of male delight, a Vampiric presence in the patch albino pumpkin in lamplight grub laced fright. Pupilless eye of ghoul’s night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/29/2009 4:42:00 PM
I like the title, too!
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Date: 10/29/2009 4:40:00 PM
Excellent, my dear friend! Such a wonderful inspiration! I see your muse is still in good form! Who is Louise Lane? Smooches back at you! Love Ya Lots, Robin
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Date: 10/20/2009 3:50:00 PM
Wonderfully done Deborah! Great imagery!! (and thanks for heads up)(sshhh) :::grin::: ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:47:00 PM
delightful juxtaposition!
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Date: 10/17/2009 8:28:00 AM
Love this twist, (even a pumpkin can have a little sexy attitude!!) Who would have thought!! ????? Clever and witty...great job!! Love, C
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Date: 10/17/2009 5:16:00 AM
Interesting thoughts here. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2009 6:34:00 PM
Cute, witty Deb, your female pumpkin! Haven't been mushroom hunting yet, can blame it on that. Lol. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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