Rip'D Off

This world seems to have strummed the wrong chord
So I offered a prayer to the Lord
Will wars never cease
When we all want peace . . . .
But my prayer was cut short by a sword
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcferran Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Very cleverly penned! ;)
Faulkner Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Sadly, too true, well expressed-
Proxenos Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Hi Rico, Striking Limerick! Yasou, Jennifer.
Bauer Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 6:47 PM
ha! well done, rico!
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